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Metamorphology by Awareness_Bringer for ArmIa, Swirlything, WindstarOsprey, Strange_Things_Are_Happening_Here, JXW_SOC, AssassinsCreedMaster, AnimatedGamer, TalyllyntheIronWarrior, Xavier_Rall, Sunnylighter, GAMERBLADE, Jgalue1, TheIronSoldier, LesterThePoet59, TheInfamousMan, SoraWithAnS
Fandoms: Sonic the Hedgehog - All Media Types, Sonic the Comic
24 Sep 2025
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All because of some taunting words that led to a dare with unexpected results, Metamorphia, the artificial shapeshifter brought into being when the planet Mobius is under the cruel reign of Doctor Robotnik, has defected, in more ways than one, from the dictator's service to join up with the famed leader of the Freedom Fighters. Said leader, embarrassingly, is also the new object in Metamorphia's lovesick eyes.
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This story may seem boring, for it seems as though it is about a normal girl with her simple life. But, there is one major thing about this girl that she has hidden all too well. 15-year-old Vanessa has struggled with social skills her whole life. Mostly because of what made its home comfortable inside her all those years ago. I know, it sound ominous, but let me explain. There was a time, way before you and I, or even Vanessa when this world was graced with the power of magic. Except, as all things are faced with an event as its test of strength, it was magic’s turn. Despite all efforts, it did not suffice. As humans began to multiply and rampage on the surface, magic became weaker until all was lost…or so history says.
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“George?!”
Isn’t it funny how one word can make such an enormous change? One small word from one person can change a whole life. Something so simple can cause such a complicated effect. In his case, it was George’s own name. The boy felt a mix of emotions when that word rang through his ears. He felt relieved that he didn’t have to hide this from Vanessa in the long run anymore. On the other hand, he was terrified his only friend-well, the label friend is debatable- might not fully trust him anymore. He didn’t want to turn around because he certainly didn’t want to face Vanessa. To look at the shocked, and possibly heartbroken, look on her face. George forced all his courage into turning his body around to face her slowly. It felt like everything was moving in slow motion for George.
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Soooo I'm writing this on my school chromebook and im like 2 paragraphs in, gonna see if i can write a novel before they block this site. desperate for criticism :) also just got cheated on YET AGAIN so this is my project im using to get over it. You'll probably get tea in the authors notes.
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What if the portal key was destroyed during Amity and Hunter's confrontation? What if Yesterday's lie never happened? What if Vee's facade was never uncovered, leaving Camila ignorant of the reality of the situation? What if Luz finally made her way back home after three and a half years? And what if Vee doesn't want to let go of this perfect life?
A human and a demon, both so different yet so similar, share a similar dream which they knew could never become true in the place of their birth. It was after years of quiet suffering, that one day like any other both caught a glimpse of a world beyond their wildest imagination. And while the human saw a bizarre, yet fantastical world that offered her a chance to make her dreams come true. The demon saw an opportunity to leave all of her suffering behind, and finally find the peace she has desired for so long...
Unknowingly to them... an exchange was made between the two, that would grant them the life they both desired for so long...
And unfortunately for them, the person they both love will face the consequences of their actions.
Basically: Yesterday's lie never happened, and the story that results from its outcome.
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Soldier dad and Spider son by ghost_writer616
Fandoms: Batman - All Media Types, DCU, The Avengers (Marvel Movies), Spider-Man - All Media Types
23 Sep 2025
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Peter hunched it back into place quickly, muttering, “Seriously—did New York get a redesign while we weren’t looking? Because this place is…way too Batman-y.”
“Not New York,” Bucky said, voice flat.
“No kidding,” Peter said, half to himself. He shifted, wincing faintly at the bruises blooming under his hoodie. “So what’s the plan? We got no Stark, no Strange, no Avengers…just us. And, you know, a very questionable Uber service through reality.”
Or; Peter and Bucky in Gotham.
Or Or; I went down the Peter in Gotham rabbit hole and Bucky is there ‘cause I can and he’s the best.
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- Part 8 of DCU crossover
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007n7 is bigender and hasn't come out to anyone else afraid of how they'll treat her so she only expresses herself as a woman when alone this is fine until one day she is suddenly put into a round while she's dressed up.
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Me totally not projecting my autism onto 007n7 and making him suffer
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“Did you see what I’m wearing?” she asked.
Sam let out a long, slow breath. “How could I not?”
Juān knew how much she loved it. How hungry her eyes were when they roamed across her body. She kissed Sam’s hand again and dragged her lower lip along the back of her fingers, never breaking eye contact.
“Did you see what I’m not wearing?” Juān asked.
A sharp intake of breath. “No,” Sam whispered.
Her mother would kill her for this.
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The Elliot Family realizes the lack of human servants and also don’t feel like paying for workers. The solution: adopt a kid and essentially make them the servant. Now Rivera needs to get himself accustomed to the Elliot’s manor to avoid punishments the Elliot’s put their poor daughter through and maybe help her out and the drones in the process. Read to discover the Elliots’ untold story.
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- Part 1 of Skarmy’s Murder Drones Trilogy
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Just adventures. with a player and a fan by MarkTheCoolGuy
Fandoms: Exotic Escapade (Web Series)
23 Sep 2025
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Ken wants to have accompany, so he wrote a letter to his star. Not knowing that it'll change his life.
Join in with the two on endless adventures!
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- Part 1 of Just adventures.
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Chloe Kim wants to belong. Sirius Black wants to burn everything he belongs to.
Neither expects to fall for the other.But seven years at Hogwarts has a way of changing people-through screaming matches, late-night tutoring sessions, and far too many almosts.
a super slow burn, will-they-won't-they romance. you might want to punch Sirius Black (a lot)... but hey, he's Sirius Black. stick around! i promise you it's worth it.
will be updated at least once a week :)
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Latencia by Airam19052005
Fandoms: Spider-Man - All Media Types, Marvel's Spider-Man (Insomniac Games Video Games)
22 Sep 2025
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Una tormenta de nieve fuera de temporada toma por sorpresa a los Spider-Man de Nueva York. Lo que parecía un simple patrullaje termina con Peter y Miles enfrentando algo que va más allá del frío: instintos, respuestas que no entienden del todo, y un vínculo que comienza a transformarse.
Latencia es una colección de fragmentos donde el sentido arácnido se intensifica, el cuerpo reacciona antes que la mente, y la conexión entre ambos Spider-Men evoluciona de formas inesperadas. No hay una línea recta, solo momentos entre la calma y el caos, entre el deber y el instinto.
pd: actualizaciones esporádicas, no tengo ni idea de a donde quiero llegar con esto pero soy completamente incapaz de hacer historias cortas asi que conociéndome a medida que escriba surgirá una trama, o quien sabe?, puede que sea la primera vez que termine una historia, la esperanza es lo ultimo que se pierde
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It was a sunny day, with those puffy clouds in the sky that looked like cotton candy. My dear wife, Hope, always enjoyed taking walks with our lovely dog, Cody, on days like this. But today was not a lovely day; it was my wife's funeral.
I AM NOT THE WRITER I beta read for my friends and post their stories with permission.
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"When I open the door, I want to see your amazed face when I reveal the whitest and softest wings you have ever seen! Then, I'll become the strongest Lightwing ever!” She answered, excitement pooling out with every word.
“Momma! Look! My new wings finally formed! Aren’t they so pretty? I bet they look as white as snow!” She exclaimed, practically jumping from her excitement. But that quickly faded as she focused on her mother’s face.
I AM NOT THE WRITER I beta read for my friends and post their stories with permission.
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Fear Gas, Joker Venom and Cuddle Pollen became a drug sought out by people outside of Gotham. That is a major problem. The head of the organisation is good at keeping themself hidden and elusive. That is an even bigger problem. It's good that the Red Hood is still an amicable figure and dealing in drugs.
(Just because I didn't choose archive warnings, doesn't mean they don't apply. I would be spoiling the story if I elected archiv warnings right now. Please take care of yourself while reading)
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Harry Potter and the Ashes of the Grave by TheLoneSpirithunter
Fandoms: Harry Potter - J. K. Rowling
22 Sep 2025
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The gods were worried. The World as they knew it was far too damaged due to the schemes of one Wannabe Light Lord. So what did they decide to do?
They chose to offer to send the new master of Death back in time to fix everything.Harry Potter. The New Master of Death has just found out his life was controlled and his friends really were with him for the Money and are planning to kill him so when offered a chance to do it all again of course he says yes.
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Chorus of Echoes by Xologen
Fandoms: 僕のヒーローアカデミア | Boku no Hero Academia | My Hero Academia (Anime & Manga)
22 Sep 2025
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Izuku wasn’t good. They knew that—had always known that. Every day, for years, he had reminded them, carving reality into their skin with every whisper. And yet, through all of it, they had resisted the pull to become something worse. Until, one day, they just... broke.
Now, they were on their own. No more chains or looming threats of punishment. Just an empty world stretching before them, unfamiliar yet full of potential.
At first, they did nothing. Hollow and empty, the thought of ending it all was ever-present. It would be so easy—just a step and it would all be over. The pain, the suffering, the noise.
But they weren’t alone. Not really.
They were only one part of the chorus, and while they may have been the one in control, the others had their own opinions. And death? Death wasn’t on the itinerary.
So, if they were stuck on this mortal coil a little longer, they might as well make the best of it. Maybe learn what it meant to live, to laugh, and even—to love.
Though, it would probably help if they stopped talking to the voices out loud. People kept staring at them like they were crazy.
Not that they were wrong. But it was terribly inconvenient.
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- Part 3 of Just be yourself, whoever that may be
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Hunting Gone Wrong (THIS IS WHY WE SHOULDN’T BE LEFT ALONE) by Elias_Wood
Fandoms: 鬼滅の刃 | Demon Slayer: Kimetsu no Yaiba (Anime)
22 Sep 2025
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Tanjiro and Inosuke get sent on a mission without their dear third, Zenitsu.
This is how it goes terribly, no good, very bad.
Also Inosuke is very autistic.
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- Part 1 of 2023 Flufftober X Whumptober
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Earning Trust by Trikucian
Fandoms: Fire Emblem: Fuukasetsugetsu | Fire Emblem: Three Houses
22 Sep 2025
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Byleth juggles her attraction for both the charming Prince Dimitri and the mysterious Seteth. Each chapter is from a single point of view and some are relatively short. Updates every Sunday.
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- Part 1 of Earning Trust (FE3H Longfic)