here, in the sunflower-field, i-

-inspired by Clannad's sunflower field scene (anime) + my daydream marriage proposal scene!(just a girl dreamin, really...)
-Recommend you listen to Love Story by Indila as you read!

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~~i love you. i love you. i love you.~~

i’ve been struck by a vivacious deity; made of daydreams and chocolate- ooo-ooo-ahhh!

twirling in the leprechaun grass, just shimmering galaxies.

really, you’re a fucking miracle! ~~my.my.my.miracle!~~

keep dancing as the fine ballerina you are-i COULDN’T have it any other way!

~~i love you. i love you. i love you.~~

in your gorgeous, pearly-gown-all milkyway(like your bones.bones.bones.)

chilly winds ruffle your locks, burning me with its crispy-ember hue.

“Chuuya…” your veins are made of honey. i only adore your cherry smile, your hazy blushes.

hehehehehehehehe…!

the sun sets wickedly ripe among the bright skies. i merely sweat liquid-gold since you’re around.

“Shhhh…” here, in the sunflower-field, wishes come true.

the flowers sashay as if dancing with him too …

ba-dump. ba-dump.

happiness swelters in my chest.

angel.angel.-

when you cradle my cheek, i only die. "your eyes look beautiful today…”

ba-dump. ba-dump.

kissing you has never felt so suicidal-i don’t think i’ll come out of this alive darling!

but you're so worth it-oh! more than a ten-billion masterpiece-

chilled, hypnotic pupils spill their secret confession. i can taste it on your strawberry mouth as well; i love you. i love you. i love you too.

Chapter 2: Passion-fruit is my favorite corruption!

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today tastes like passion-fruit darling-mmm…

more.more.more.

with stars shimee-ing in the daylight and sh-nickering at our marshmallow-love story,

“hum-dee-dumm…”

at the way i carousel among sunflowers while you gape.gape.gape.in awe.

“once upon a time,”

my milky-dress sashays in the pine-scented winds.

“lived you and i, and you and i-”

i know you adore our lullaby...

“-downing all the pretty clouds”

“-till our souls drank heaven-mmm....”

so my vocals crescendo into ethereal-timbres, as i keep dancing.

“-laa-dii-daa-laalaalaa…!”

see-it’s just what you do to me!

soothing our aching hearts...

ba-dump. ba-dump.

“Chuuya…”

You reek of chocolate and happiness;

the recipe for our love.

and i can taste it when i caress your glassy-cheeks.

"shhh...."

because- “your eyes look beautiful today…”

they do. they do. they do.

what a savory blush…Quick! Gotta kiss you-mmm!

more.more.more.

i don’t think you understand dear,

how gorgeous you really are...

truly breathtaking-oh!

ba-dump. ba-dump.

why-you're the definition of my corruption!

~~i love you. i love you. i love you too.~~

Notes:

i'm feeling pretty darn good about this right now.
-and I didn't mention Chuuya's singing from Dazai's p.o.v. because I didn't think of it until now and I'm too scared of ruining his perspective by trying to include it somewhere. Sorry!

Notes:

-i know Chuuya probably DESPISES cross-dressing...but his feminine look just matches so well-shhh...! a minor ooc i couldn't resist ok?!
(and if you couldn't figure out why Chuuya complemented Dazai's eyes-basically, it's his/the writer's way of saying...Dazai doesn't seem to be all that suicidal ("mackerel" eyes)-not when Chibi's around. Instead they shine! Should we do Chuuya's p.o.v. ?
~much love, Porky!

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on_acid (Guest) on Chapter 2 Thu 26 Sep 2019 12:56AM UTC

Hii!! I just wanted to let you know that your writing style is absolutely captivating and whimsical!!! Thank you for putting yourself out there and sharing your gem with the world. I don’t typically like to comment but I noticed that you didn’t have any comments and I was *shook* by the disrespect (and your magical words), so I felt the need to. Your writing is full of so much life??? How is it possible for anyone to even be this refreshingly wonderful???? And that line near the end, “why-you're the definition of my corruption!”??, in-fucking-genius. Have a great rest of your day you wonderful human!! :))

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1. Strawberry_Frazzle on Chapter 2 Fri 27 Sep 2019 05:25AM UTC
  
  hi, omg-can I just say....THANK YOU! Like actually, you're basically the comment iv'e been looking for since I first started writing not too long ago! Not to be cocky or anything, but I've just grown much more confident recently only to receive very little reviews or kudos. Sometimes it doesn't bother me. Other times, it can really mess with my self-esteem. Especially since I've been pumping out a lot cute/happy-ending soukoku. This fandom doesn't have enough and I LOVE making people smile. Comments let me know if I've accomplished that you know? They also let me know if i've managed to accomplish all the other things I was going for. So when I first read your words, I literally could not stop smiling and giggling to the point where my mom had to tell me to stfu! and she's as sweet as cherry-pie! You're literally the definition of everything iv'e always DREAMED of seeing in a review. And i'm so overwhelmed that this actually happened, that i actually made a person feel so much emotion the way you did, i unintentionally put off responding to you. I was speechless and scared i wouldn't find the right way of thanking you. Also, I've re-read this comment probably 10 times today alone. And I'll probably keep doing so. I rarely get responses and this one is just so-oh! I'll treasure it forever! my most treasured one in fact! thank you! thank you! thank you!
  I didn't realize I was so refreshingly wonderful or whimsical (a part of me was always scared of being a try-hard due to my (prosy?) style. ) Especially because I have zero writing experience, despite my yearning for a creative writing degree. I always felt like I wouldn't amount to any actual talent because of it. Everyone on here is just so good and i'm constantly struggling to write in the basic third-person style. It's why I started to simply go with what sounds pretty to me. Hence, the birth of my "magical" style. This also makes me happy because it's EXACTLY what I strive for, creating stories that make you feel like you're in a fairy tale or something along those lines. Perhaps I'm misinterpreting but it sounds like that's how you felt. I think my favorite line would have to be "your writing is full of so much life???"oh-you're tearing my heart to shreds you know? please don't stop!
  And yes, I really liked the line about Chuuya's corruption as well. I was scared no one would care or notice it. So maybe you also caught Dazai's suicide reference in the first chapter. I just felt like something about themselves was missing. Something strong enough to be like-ok, this totally screams of THESE characters SPECIFICALLY.
  Seeing that you liked my writing so much, (-insert shameless advertisement), feel free to check out my other Soukoku works! Most of them are drabbles if you want a quick read while I'm currently working on a couple of short/long stories. It would be an HONOR to know how you felt about the rest(hopefully good)!
  may you have a great day too wonderful human! and thx for sifting through my ted-talk!(and your HEART-WRENCHING REVIEW!) THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU! I'm so grateful...
  
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crimsonimposter on Chapter 2 Mon 14 Oct 2019 05:22AM UTC

i could never imagine having a writing style this amazing! holy shit dude!!!! its absolutely beautiful!!!!

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1. Strawberry_Frazzle on Chapter 2 Tue 15 Oct 2019 06:16AM UTC
  
  Hi! Ok-thank you for your kind words dear! Oh! you're melting my heart to icecream puddles! Seriously-these kinds of comments always get me through my day. Didn't think i could shake anyone as much as you seem to be. Kinda makes me feel a little special.
  May you have a blessed life !
  
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