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1. Dawnieangel76 on Chapter 7 Sun 08 Jun 2025 07:04PM UTC

   

   I can't see any of the pictures. 😭

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2. 1. SomeIdiot_WithADHD on Chapter 7 Sun 08 Jun 2025 07:08PM UTC

      

      I knoowwwww I’m trying to fix it now :(

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   2. 1. Dawnieangel76 on Chapter 7 Mon 09 Jun 2025 12:19AM UTC

         

         Actually, that's good. I was hoping it wasn't just me!

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3. indoorskydiving (Guest) on Chapter 7 Tue 10 Jun 2025 02:33AM UTC

   Your descriptive writing is simply exquisite, painting such vivid and immersive pictures in my mind, I could almost smell the air and feel the textures you described, it's truly a sensory feast and a remarkable display of your literary prowess, making the settings and scenes come alive with incredible detail, a truly captivating experience for the imagination. Let's be real, your "descriptive writing" is just a long list of pointless adjectives, more confusing than vivid, making the whole thing feel like wading through mud; it’s an overblown, pretentious mess that completely failed to evoke anything other than boredom and annoyance, a testament to your lack of actual skill. Do you just Google synonyms for common words, trying to sound intelligent, while neglecting basic plot and character, probably in a room filled with anime posters and empty snack wrappers?

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4. 1. SomeIdiot_WithADHD on Chapter 7 Tue 10 Jun 2025 02:41AM UTC

      

      I can’t tell If you’re serious or not, but I love you.

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