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  1. Tysm, this comment made my day! Yes, Mira is a suuuper unreliable narrator and 100% the reason why this fic will be the slowest of slow burns lol. The guys are trying their best to hand her a clue and Mira just keeps going "Well this has nothing to do with me and probably won't have any repercussions. Time to move on!"

    I also think she'd just generally be very prickly and hard to get close to; I think their respective weapons are the perfect visual metaphor for what the girls are like in the movie, and were such a perfect choice from the creators. Mira with a pole arm, keeping everything at arm's length; Zoey's throwing knives, rapid-fire and constant; Rumi's sword hitting a middle ground between them: quick to take action but also on guard.

    I had a lot of fun writing this story and I hope you'll read more of it!

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