Meveane (Guest)
on Chapter 2
Sun 05
Oct 202503:33PM UTC
I love this story so much!! Super well written and the characters really act like themselves. I have one note though, how did Sasuke manage to put on a glove by himself if he has one arm? It would be cute to have sakura help him lol
Making the characters feel like themselves while simultaneously setting the story in a AU where they've spent 14 years growing apart is one of the challenging parts. Sasuke is a difficult character to write, specially from his POV, because you have to show that he feels emotions deeply without outright acknowledging them. A bit of humour is the only way I know how to do that but I worried it made Sasuke OOC because he's not the most jokey character. I'm glad it's coming through.
In regards to the glove...The in-world explanation is he's a ninja with 14 years of experience being one-handed and alone. Also ...teeth (those fanarts 😳🤭). The reality is...I keep forgetting he only has one hand and it's very possible to encounter mistakes regarding that (hopefully not many), or mentions to everyday actions that I haven't really stopped to think 'wait, how the hell do you do this with one hand'. Thank you for bringing it to my attention, because I hadn't noticed the glove thing and it's an interesting question to which I have no answer beyond the one I've given. I'll try to keep it more in mind when writing!!
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