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  1. SeleneK (Guest) on Chapter 40 Mon 06 Oct 2025 08:20AM UTC

    I am so incredibly disappointed that I can barely see the screen through my tears. The constant emphasis on control, the chilling lack of individual rights, and the blind obedience of the supporting cast is a terrifying portrait of creeping fascism. I am pleading with you, I am begging you to stop this arc before it completely destroys the story’s integrity. I am so desperate to believe in the characters again! This is too dark, too political, and too emotionally draining! You HAVE to listen to your readers! PLEASE, I am begging for a different direction!

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    1. MaraudingCaptain67_38 on Chapter 40 Mon 06 Oct 2025 03:09PM UTC

      Rest assured, friend, things are getting better and more interesting from then on out. Now we're getting to the active part of the war

       

      But I'm glad you got to voice these sentiments. In fact, this is exactly what I was aiming for with these chapters: to show that even the story's good guys are flawed individuals. Argilac Baratheon chief among them.

       

      "The chilling lack of individual rights" I admit that is a new one. Would you be so kind as to show me instances where you got to think that there's a lack of individual rights in this story?

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