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  1. davrinsleftpectoral on Chapter 10 Wed 15 Oct 2025 07:24PM UTC

    Did I read this chapter before any of the others? Yes. Because I’m an adult and I do what I want. I do also have the first chapter open in a browser tab because I WILL get to it, eventually. I’m too slow of a reader for the amount of stuff i want to be reading. Anyway.

    “Oh Rook...” Lace pads over, seating herself beside her neurotic lover
    Hahaha please. Poor Eris. I think she’s normal levels of neurotic.

    Just because you're taller... Much taller, and a bit mus... Very muscly...” Lace's mind drifts off elsewhere. Absorbed in some rousing daydream, her hand trails down to the length of the warrior's abdomen.
    “As you are saying, my randy queen?”
    I love them, your honor.

    “Congratulations mon trésor, you've given birth to a thirty year old dwarf!”
    A snippet including this part was the very first thing I ever read of yours. I will never forget it lol. It seriously still makes me laugh so much!

    unlike Manfred, whose skeletal finger poked and prodded at her cleavage, hissing something vaguely akin to 'honkers.' His vocab grows by the day, Rook considers dryly.
    😂😂😂

    While it’s true I don’t know the overall plot of this fic, I do know that I love Eris and Harding so so so much. And your humor makes me laugh way too much. I enjoyed this immensely.

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    1. MagusPie on Chapter 10 Thu 16 Oct 2025 06:52AM UTC

      Yay it's DLP!

      The best thing about being an adult is that we get to do what we want, and I'm glad you exercised this freedom so I could wake up to this lovely comment.

      Don't sweat it, I'm also a slow reader, and I'm simply gleeful whenever anyone gives my literary brain farts the time of day.

      I'm not sure why I made Lace and Rook such horndogs though. Well, I am... Something something being a woman of an age... Oh god I'm over sharing again. Anyway, I hope that isn't too off putting 😂

      I don't make it a secret that there are some things in this fic I'd change, now that I've been 'writing' a little bit longer, but I still get a kick out of my own dumb jokes, even the mention of the stage performer who queefs fire (don't think too long about the science behind that)... Only high class humour here mate. The kudos regret must be kicking in lmao.

      Thanks again!

      Last Edited Thu 16 Oct 2025 07:00AM UTC

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