i love this so much omg luke is so cute and shy i just wanna like pat him on the head or something idk and also cal/michael/luke friendship is my favourite thing and you're writing it really well!! i really like ashton's character too like idk he seems really nice but he also has that ~cool older guy~ vibe about him like idk it just works well.
luke though omg WHY did he tell ashton he can surf like smh is this going to end badly luke why. but yes omg i'm awful at leaving comments but yeah i really like this so far and i can't wait to see where it goes, i'm excited for the next update :D
(Time to play it cool because one of my favorite authors just commented on my story. No big deal.)
Yesss Luke is a shy lil cutie at first & Ashton is suave, but character development is imminent and I really hope you like how it goes because you are great and I want to impress you okay
Thank you for taking the time to write a comment omfg <3 (◠ω◠✿)
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lazhton on Chapter 1 Wed 25 Jun 2014 08:36AM UTC
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