Comment on A whole raft of trouble

  1. Elf+Kid2.0 (Guest) on Chapter 2 Thu 24 Aug 2017 07:38PM UTC

    This is really, really good.

    I like how you portray Bog, and his thoughts on the (platonic) friendship with Dawn. I like the characterization. The bit about the rare and expensive book being sold, and the confusion regarding the price, seemed extremely realistic, frustrating, and downright PAINFUL, because it seems like a very easy mistake to have been made, and it is also a terrible thing to have happen. I hope that the book, or another copy, can be found soon. The gease must be satisfied; the contract must be fulfilled. I love the characterization and interpersonal dynamics in this story.

    This is great and amazing and fascinating, and I love it. thank you so much for writing this! :D

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    1. LizzieBathory on Chapter 2 Mon 04 Sep 2017 09:41PM UTC

      Thank YOU so much for the praise! This comment definitely helped me get to chapter 4.

      I intended Bog to mention the number on the inside of the cover was the publishing date, not the price, but totally forgot! I'm glad you feel his pain.

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