I just reread this because of the update and I couldn't remember the story so I thought I would start again at the beginning and I just have to say, that song/poem is so beautiful and how panicky you have Dean is just perfect! I love this so much!!! The wording of the poem is amazingly fitting for the boys. It is just awesome!!! I didn't leave enough love in my first comment when I initially read this so I wanted to make sure you understood how wonderful I think this is!!
The song is actually something I totally did write as sort of a stand-alone (or it was going to accompany a very short story actually) but I just ended up running with the whole thing and it took on a life of its own! :D
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