Oh gosh you had me on edge as much as Yoongi with all that anticipation! Loved it! A+, it doesn't read like the first smut scene you've written- I love the perfect blend of hot and smexy with tender cuteness, they're mated now, ah!
I also really liked how you portrayed the playful nature of their relationship and the apprehension with which they crossed those boundaries
I'm glad I didn't disappoint! I did really want to portray the playfulness of their relationship; AND OH MY GOD THANKS I AM SO GLAD THAT I DIDN'T SUCK ASS AT WRITING SMUT!! When I was writing it, I couldn't bring myself to make Hoseok a total asshole, so he got significantly softer, haha :D Thanks for commenting, I really love to hear feedback and I'm definitely the type of author to respond to everyone uwu
and the next chapter is going to be my absolute favorite one just because I may love jin as much as I love myself, which is a hella lot
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