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  1. Joylee on Chapter 2 Tue 24 Apr 2018 08:14PM UTC

    Love the 'boys night'. And how it morphed into a 'get Gold a date' night. I particularly liked when Gold admitted that he needed the company of adults occasionally. Good job.

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    1. ml101 on Chapter 2 Sat 05 May 2018 01:02PM UTC

      Thank you!

      This whole idea morphed from your comment on Chapter 1 and it got me imagining a lot more and giving life to this verse. At first I just wanted Gold to have a reason to be out at the Rabbit Hole and it became this father's night out which fit the story and the characters perfectly.

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