I loved this! There aren't nearly enough stories where Peter and Tony are stuck leaning on each other, and you did a fantastic job keeping them in character too. One thing though - try to start a new line everytime someone speaks. Sometimes I couldn't keep up with who was speaking because they were in the same paragraph. Other than that, I thoroughly enjoyed it! Well-done!
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Mrs_N_Uzumaki Sat 06 Oct 2018 10:23PM UTC
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