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  1. yukihiko (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 29 Nov 2014 12:35PM UTC

    OK plot but your writing is just awful, it spoils it. Maybe instead of pressing the post button so quickly you should sit through and read your work or give it to someone else to look over.

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    1. Yaoi24/7 (Guest) on Chapter 1 Sat 29 Nov 2014 04:20PM UTC

      Damn hateful much?? I get contrustive critisicm but that was just rude

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      1. Lexus520 on Chapter 1 Sat 29 Nov 2014 09:36PM UTC

        Ignore it. Everyone tries their best and improve with time. I like the story as always mumbled so write on and keep your head held high

        Last Edited Sat 29 Nov 2014 09:37PM UTC

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        1. kiyodoesart on Chapter 1 Tue 02 Dec 2014 01:17PM UTC

          thankyou<3

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    3. kiyodoesart on Chapter 1 Tue 02 Dec 2014 01:26PM UTC

      tbh, english is not my native language so thats why, maybe my writing is not really effective for u, for that, im really sorry that my writing doesnt suit ur taste. but you know, im still improving and there are still many people out there who loves my story as much as i love writing them, so i will keep on writing as long as the ideas dont run out from my brain. for the editing part, well, bcs im not really good at english, i couldn't really find the part u find wrong or awful and for the beta reader, i dont feel professional enough to have someone looking after my story.
      so once again, thankyou for criticizing my story, ur comment really is like a wake-up call to me:)

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