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  1. Sath Tue 09 Jul 2019 11:34PM UTC

    THIS IS SO EXCELLENT!!!! I HAVE LIVEBLOGGED THIS TWICE TO YOU BUT I'M STILL SO INVESTED IN THIS STORY!!!!

    Like it's so chewy?????? With characterization? And there's still a delicious sadness at the end? Like you wrote really hot smut and then the end kicks me in my erection!!!! I love how dysfunctional YQY and SJ are even though they've started having sex - like, it's solved NOTHING between them because they are still not communicating!!! SJ's jealous playacting is like, emblematic of how SJ has all these feelings and wants for YQY that he won't admit to, so he just acts out and plays nasty with him instead because he's so afraid of rejection because he thinks that YQY rejected him AAHHHHHHHH You balance it so well!!!! Also damn you wrote this in YQY POV which is just, top kudos ???? Like it's so hard to write YQY and you fucking nailed him. All the sad yearning combined with being an emotional brick that makes me want to shake him.

    Also oh my god JEALOUSY IS MY KINK HOW DID YOU KNOOOOOOOOOOW it's also especially good because SJ like, manufactures it and works it into the humiliation fantasy he's got going on and YQY just wants to chug respecting Xiao Jiuce but SJ won't let him bc he has such a low opinion of himself and YQY's feelings for him and here I am, weeping, boner in hand???? Like isn't that honestly what we all want most from Qijiu? I just love how both YQY and SJ are trapped in this scenario where they can't escape the roles they've picked out for themselves even though they both want to make love tenderly AHHHHHHH

    thank u from transitioning from snowball to sadness.... what a first kiss indeed

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    1. acernor Wed 10 Jul 2019 09:44AM UTC

      haha... "fucking nailed him"... not yet i didn't ;)

      ofc i know jealousy is ur kink we share!!! one brain!!!!!!!!!!

      "respecting Xiao Jiuce" I LOVE U!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

      "they can't escape the roles they've picked out for themselves even though they both want to make love tenderly" Y E P a buncha dumbasses!!!!!!!! there's only two of them but somehow they have not two, but a WHOLE BUNCH of dumbass between them!!!!!!!

      yqy is like "this counts as a kiss, right? :< i can tell myself that i've kissed him?" he just wants.... tender....... AGH

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