Comment on Don't Run (Stop Holding Your Tongue)

  1. kittywiz Sun 18 Aug 2019 05:32AM UTC

    THANK YOU FOR THIS WONDERFUL THING. Like holy shit, I've been wanting someone to write something similar to this forever because in a lot of ways the second season kinda just glossed over the whole "repercussions of being stuck in a hospital bed for two years" for a whole heck of a lot of other fluff-and not the good kind. This kind of fulfills that itch a bit of what could've happened had they all just woken up after and I adore both the way you've written it and the way you characterize Asuna in this story. Its beautiful and wonderful and asijsajkldjsk.

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    1. Chill_with_Penguins Fri 11 Oct 2019 12:36PM UTC

      Sunlight and trees on Lammas

      Awwww, thank you! I actually only wrote this because I was also looking for a story that fulfilled that "itch" and was having trouble finding one XD

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      1. WindHunter (Guest) Fri 11 Nov 2022 05:30AM UTC

        This is beautiful and heartwarming and hits the notes of reality because they had decided to live in the game. There was no choice, they had lives, they had dreams, and yes they could die but they were living. And then to have everyone else is so relieved to have them back and yet they don't know how to live here. They don't fit neatly back into their lives and they like who they've become on the whole. This was so we'll written to show the transition of their lives.

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