Okay, the first chapter interested me, the second chapter has sold me. Family therapy scenes are fantastic opportunities for both character development and comedy, and you got both. "Dewey rocked back and forth in his chair, before rapidly blurting. 'I think I like guys!'" Right there, in one phrase, character development /and/ comedy. And you've set up a fun character arc for Scrooge—I'm really, really excited to see him open up at some point. I could blab on for a while, but needless to say I've bookmarked this fic and I'm excited to see where you go with it!
Thank you show much! I was afraid this all would be a little of character, but I’m glad it seems like I’m doing well at writing them. I was trying to keep it true to the cartoon, but also have my own opinions on things, like Dewey’s sexuality. I thought it would be like him, especially after they left his love interest ambiguous in that dream episode.
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dorbee on Chapter 2 Fri 29 Nov 2019 09:36PM UTC
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IndefiniteHeaven on Chapter 2 Fri 29 Nov 2019 09:48PM UTC
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