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  1. TurboMufasa on Chapter 17 Mon 13 Apr 2020 09:30PM UTC

    THAT'S MY BOI!

    I think you did a super good job in capturing him! It makes sense that hundreds of years later and lots of wallowing in regret, he's a lot more calmed down and but also will still jump on any opportunity to brag because he can. I also like how you had him come through as the updrafts themselves trying to help Idea in his own michievous way. I was super sad that no one had said his name and all he wanted was to be remembered.
    And that hint that she knew him before is killing me, I want to know! I have a suspicion but idk if it's too out there so I'll just wait haha

    I also absolutely love how you write about Ganon's efforts and the strain they put on Terciel. It's such an interesting dynamic where it breaks your heart but you know he's stuck and doesn't have much of a choice, but he will still help people as much as he can. Very good chapter!! As always, I'm excited for more!

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