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  1. Lavenza (Guest) on Chapter 2 Sat 27 Jun 2020 07:08PM UTC

    Fugo. My man. My pal. My buddy.
    If the adorable orange asks you to watch a movie, you watch that fking movie.

    On a serious note - Giorno casually eating through the entire convo and Mista's dream, and then adding some bits just to stir some shit is sooo in character. I really like your Giorno. And I releate to Mista's dream - my own dreams are usually crazy like that.

    OOOF MY HEART ALMOST BROKE. Fugo being shoooook that Bruno cares??? This was so painful but so good. And Narancia's little waves are wholesome♡

    I really love the way you write, it's so fluent and the pacing is really fitting. The characters are being fleshed out nicely, piece by piece and overall, it's nice to read. Sometimes you find a story where you only ready the update, but then there are stories so well written where you just want to read everything once more before getting to that new chapter. Your story is just like that!

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    1. merulus on Chapter 2 Sat 27 Jun 2020 08:05PM UTC

      EXACTLY, fugo eventually will accept his offer.... one day

      im glad you like how i've written giorno so far! i get a little nervous about if i've portrayed the characters correctly whenever i post a new chapter, but its good to know that you like him so far!

      yes!!! fugo's so used to people, even his own family, pushing his problems and feelings aside.. but then all of a sudden this stranger hears what he has to say and not only validates his thoughts but also offers to help him??? fugo has no idea how to act
      narancia is trying so hard to be a friendly face to fugo despite their less-than-ideal first meeting, he's so cute

      this means so much to me thank you!!! i haven't seriously written anything in years so im so SO glad that you like how i write. it really makes me feel more confident with my story :)
      i hope you continue to enjoy it as the story goes on!

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