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  1. fairdeath on Chapter 3 Tue 30 Jun 2015 02:32PM UTC

    the world that this story is set in - the idea that other universes are created by our own and bleed into ours, that people protect our universe by jumping into others, is so amazing to me. the world you're building is so fascinating and an idea ive not seen before but, god, do i love good world building, and you've managed to integrate it into the story by explaining it to a character, rather than a person, and in a way that doesn't feel pushy - win, win, win! i also love the cliches going on with mark and the reader. you've won me over already.

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    1. kurobizzle on Chapter 3 Tue 30 Jun 2015 10:02PM UTC

      Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I really take it to heart whenever anyone compliments the world I created for this story. It took a lot of time and effort to figure everything out, all because I wanted to have the characters jump into different video games. I hope to use the same world for other stories, but haven't thought up any plots so far besides this one. Anyways, thank you again! :DDD

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