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  1. sugoitastic Fri 03 Jul 2015 08:48PM UTC

    ahhhhh this was so great <3
    i love love love when high school spiderman gets a whole 'underage' focus because yeah i know, spidey's kick ass, but he's just a teenager and even if he can hold his own doesn't mean his age can just be ignored. i was really annoyed with tony though because for all his super intelligence and super awesome hacking skills, when he tries to address issues like these, they usually don't end well. they end worse. :0
    i loved the scene with deadpool tbh- especially the fact that he out of all the other supers were able to convince peter to wear the regulation jacket. the scene with the hulk was great too, and i love it whenever flash is an mega spiderman fanboy!!!
    all of your spiderman stories are wonderful, I can't get enough them! i'll even admit that i sniffled quite a bit while reading this c;
    as for the whole peter shipping thing i have the same problem. there's ok ships with mary jane, johnny storm, gwen and harry, but then everyone else when he's depicted as a highschool student are like, twice his age, and that causes a lot of problems for my shipping self •~• cause y know, illegalness
    well anywho, you are probably my favoritest author on this site! whenever i get an email saying you posted another story, i get really pumped. like, jump up and down and kind of screech pumped!!!!
    keep writing please!!!! :0

    sorry of this isnt very well written oAo writing is not my forte so i usually refrain from making comments :0
    im also on my phone so theres that ;p

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    1. aloneintherain Sat 04 Jul 2015 02:50AM UTC

      Wowwww, thank you so much for your comment!! This literally made my day, I was so excited when I saw a long comment.
      I'm so glad you enjoyed this! And I have a lotttt of feelings about Spidey's age and the people in his life, hence the 17K fic. And I agree 100% with your opinions about Tony (I love him, but BUDDY, stop MEDDLING), and I'm glad you liked the other characters too :)) And I will keep writing!! I'm currently on break, and I plan on doing a lot.

      Thank you for taking the time to not only read my work, but comment. I admit, when I read that I'm one of your favourite authors, I may have had to go and shove my face in a pillow and squeal for a little. Ahem. Feedback like this just. Amazing. /Thank you./

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