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1. constantlytired66 on Chapter 1 Mon 14 Sep 2020 01:44PM UTC

   

   I have it written out but I accidentally made it gay so I’m trying to decide if I wanna post that or rewrite it to make it make more sense

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2. 1. Inoke on Chapter 1 Tue 15 Sep 2020 07:56AM UTC

      

      Can you make it make sense, but leave the gay in? ;)

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   2. 1. constantlytired66 on Chapter 1 Thu 17 Sep 2020 09:22PM UTC

         

         An attempt has been made

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