DUDE!! You have excellent timing I was literally just refreshing all the tags when I saw this! It’s AMAZING omg.
Ok first off I just adore the way you write top George. He’s so /mean/ it’s so much fun! Like you can still clearly see the affection underneath, even when they’re in a scene, but he also just keeps Sapnap on the tightest leash. He doesn’t let him get away with anything and it’s perfect!! Honestly I’m so excited to watch him top Dream and have George give him orders, it’s gonna be so much fun, Dream really has no idea what’s about to come!!
God I love this trope too tho, like voyeurism is kind of a grey area I know but it’s so good to read in fanfic! Especially the way you wrote it like. It /is/ consensual, Dream just doesn’t know that, the poor boy. He’s got all this guilt and shame and he probably really hates himself for getting off thinking about his best friends, meanwhile they’re in the other room making sure he can hear them, and literally touching each other right in his lap during the movie! That was amazing btw, that entire scene was so good, especially at the end where Sapnap makes sure Dream knows what’s about to happen. Like what a little brat!!
Honestly I cannot wait for the next part, the buildup is SO good and I know that the payoff is going to be so so worth it. I can’t wait to see him just. Break and finally give in. He’s going to be so desperate and George is going to be absolutely unrelenting until Dream’s completely overwhelmed by them both.
Anyways yeah AMAZING work as always, I love your writing so so much, like I’ve said before, you’re definitely one of the best writers in the entire fandom and I cannot wait to see more from you <3333 thank you so much for the lovely dreamnotnap content, I’m definitely using this as motivation!
I swear my timming only works so well due to timezones lmao. Glad it was so on point this time tho!
Top George is so much fun to write. The more I think about it, he is such a sadist. Most of that comes from when he ran and left when Dream wanted kisses that one stream, I mean that smirk and his laughing made me go 'Wow George is mean, he really wants Dream to say it." So thats where I draw a lot of insporation is that he does love them, but hes gonna be meanly loving the entire way.
Sapnap get ZERO leeway, because he really will run away with it and George doesn't really want that, and I mean neither does Sap since he clearly loves it. Sapnap is going to have a fun time with Dream, I'm already seeing the whiplash thats gonna come from that exchange already.
Voyeurism is so grey area but so much fun to read. I think the best part of this is that Dream doesn't really know what they are doing is to tease him. Imo, Dream is guilty for liking his friends who are so clearly happy dating without him. This get so reinforced with, in his mind, how comfortable they are flirting in front of him, even Sapnap all but saying hes about to get wrecked, and they just happen to be loud. They are all little coincidences of his friends being happy in their relationship and hes the one who's bad for wanting to be a part of that. Its not angsty as much as jealousy at work, that and denial. By the way, thanks for that particular bit on Sapnap, it was a spur of the moment line tht felt so in character I just had to leave it in.
I'm looking forward to writing this next part, might start today or tomorrow but either way Dream is going to fall apart and its going to be so damn rewarding for them to break him and put him back together. George might be a little nicer to Dream, but only because its Dream's first time with them. That doesnt mean he is gonna let Dream brat however he wants, what kind of example will that give Sapnap after all? : )
You literally don't know how happy it makes me when you comment, I had another freaking freak out when I saw you commented. You are seriously one of my favorite writers ever, I get such a kick out of your stories and they are always so well written, so thank you for enjoying mine it means alot. <333
ah yeah I'm guessing you're american then? bc it was like mid afternoon for me when u posted!
Honestly he really is!! I'm gonna have to write bottom George for the oneshot tomorrow and I'm just like. I don't even know how I'm gonna do it bc I'm so used to writing him as a top skdfgjfd like you're right, that stream was just one instance where he gave off teasing top vibes, but I just get that from his entire personality! It may be me projecting a lil tho lmao who knows
And yeah like, Sapnap would Totally run away with it if George let him, and he'd like that too, but he mostly enjoys being a brat just to get put in his place. I'm definitely looking forward to seeing him getting to turn the tables on Dream tho!! Like after all this buildup, after all the teasing, he's just absolutely going to take him apart and when he's done maybe George will tell him he's a good boy and he'll just melt,, I have a thing with bratnap that has a praise kink gsjdfgh I like the idea of him fighting every step of the way because it's fun, but that just means when he does something George likes, it ruins him even more to be complimented!
Also omg I love writing tropes like that, where one person just thinks its nothing, not actual flirting or anything, all just jokes right? Meanwhile the other person is just being so Blatantly obvious it's not funny. In this case I understand bc poor Dream is definitely jealous third-wheeling here, he thinks he's just being weird wanting to fuck his friends who are in a relationship, he doesn't want to get between them! (well. He does lmao. Definitely wants to get between them, just not in a way that will make them split up or smth)
Dude!!! I'm very excited, I'm glad you're starting work on it so quickly! I'm really looking forward to seeing more of this honestly like your writing is spectacular and I just know you'll do Dream justice. George is gonna be a bit gentler about it but he's still gonna be absolutely ruined <333
Honestly its the same for me!!! I appreciate your writing so much and your comments are just so lovely??? I literally look forward to them so much, I refresh my inbox multiple times a day after I post a oneshot just to see if you've seen it yet fshdfjg. It means a lot that you like /my/ writing! Yours is just so good and it honestly deserves way more recognition! <333
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