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  1. teresis on Chapter 1 Thu 26 Nov 2020 08:25AM UTC

    .......this is the best crossover friend group, these are the most excellent characters, you have provided the best interactions with them, and i know you're going to provide so many many more AHHHHHHHH.

    I'm hungry right now and I really want to think about what kind of sandwiches Pharm would make. They would be SO FANCY.

    "Mommy needs her rest. She had a long day of trying to appear awake in exams she was not prepared to take.” MY NEW FAVORITE. Rescue her from a property that was unworthy of her!

    "I know,” Ting says, her voice pitched in a whine. “It’s just that I didn’t want to." my new child.

    you just had to go and make this all cool near future scifi, didn't you.

    "With an emphatic grin, Team leans across the blanket to ruffle Harm’s hair. “Of course you haven’t! You’re only a li’l kitten.”" i love them SO MUCH. team's gotta watch out if he thinks that's all Pharm is though. But of course, he doesn't. This is all deflection because he's grateful for the solidarity.

    i can feel just how much of the world building you have figured out, even if you're not showing all of it. it's still clearly there informing the text. it's the smartest way to do it and so it's no surprise that's how you've done it.

    "Silence, killjoy,” Ting says, pointing at him." i'm electing her queen of everything.

    “How about him?” Pharm interrupts. He’s sitting opposite Team, pointing to a dark-haired man who seems their age and whose smile hints at secrets Team would rather not learn." is it deaaaaaaaaaaan. is he doing this to try to find phaaaaaarm? are they maybe not that level of soulmates here because this is a world where kornin got to be together? any of it i don't care i'll take it all.

    "Fine,” Manaow says, sighing. Then she points at his face. “You’re going to tell me everything.”

    “Depends how nice you are to me,” Team says, sticking out his tongue.

    “Teeeeam,” she croons, wrapping her arms around his arm with a cloyingly sweet smile. “My okay buddy? Decent friend? Ordinary pal?” AUUUUUUGH i love them so much too!

    "It also knows how to annoy Team and does it weirdly often." *gasp* wait i have a new favorite. I want to read the adventures of win's tablet. It's the best. I love it.

    "‘Fuck’ is not a listed kink in The MUSE Parlor database. Shall I enter it?”

    “I hate you sometimes.”" yup yup yup yup I wish to know everything about Team's tablet AI, my new favorite character, the end.

    "Not like you’ve canceled notifications when I’ve been with friends any other time this year,” Team mutters.

    The AI doesn’t offer a defense for that." i have made the best choice.

    there is SO MUCH going on here that i absolutely adore.

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    1. Kiranokira on Chapter 1 Thu 26 Nov 2020 01:42PM UTC

      .......this is the best crossover friend group, these are the most excellent characters, you have provided the best interactions with them, and i know you're going to provide so many many more AHHHHHHHH.

      eeeee I knew I'd get a motivation bump as soon as I saw this in my inbox and I was right~! \:D/

      MY NEW FAVORITE. Rescue her from a property that was unworthy of her!

      TRUTH. Ting deserves her own series. <333

      you just had to go and make this all cool near future scifi, didn't you.

      I DID.

      i can feel just how much of the world building you have figured out, even if you're not showing all of it. it's still clearly there informing the text. it's the smartest way to do it and so it's no surprise that's how you've done it.

      ;____; Thank you so much. It's taking a lot of discipline to give small pieces at a time, but I'm practicing my willpower. ;)

      Team's tablet AI, my new favorite character, the end.

      I may or may not have been inspired by a thousand Stony fics featuring JARVIS. ;D

      there is SO MUCH going on here that i absolutely adore.

      Eeeee I'm so happy! I was going to include his first meeting with Win as well but I'm trying to make this a weekly update and I didn't want this to end up 10k and set a precedent for weekly 10k chapters. ;D

      THANK YOU AS ALWAYS. You are the wind beneath my keyboard. <3

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      1. teresis on Chapter 1 Fri 27 Nov 2020 05:58AM UTC

        she DOES all the women DO but she is one of those in the top absolutely. she's ours now that's just how it is they can be mad about it. let them be mad about it, and let that motivate them to do better by her.

        well i LOVE IT. i was not expecting that at all and it was such a cool surprise. and just like, the fact that you know not to overwhelm the text with the worldbuilding, and have to work to keep that balance: it just makes the worldbuilding that much better, and shows how much you know about how to do it right, and we're just so lucky for it.

        aaahhahahahaaa that does make a lot of sense. well, i will be all over every minute of it.

        hehehehe i used to warble that song onto voicemails for my friends, now you've got me warbling it in my head.

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        1. Kiranokira on Chapter 1 Sat 28 Nov 2020 09:57AM UTC

          :}}} Thank you as always. The last time I wrote a WIP was back in 2018 and both it and its sequel ended up 180k, so fingers crossed this one goes just as well! Though perhaps not as long. ;D

          And I'm delighted to have given you a song to sing in your head~!

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          1. teresis on Chapter 1 Sun 29 Nov 2020 07:59AM UTC

            especially after that interlude chapter 2 i would absolutely read 180k of this fic (well i mean i always would) but if it's more of these other characters i would be so very very happy. but perhaps for your sake maybe not so long. be sure to give yourself rest and grace and time and plenty of time for yourself!

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