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  1. Anon (Guest) on Chapter 3 Mon 30 Nov 2020 06:34PM UTC

    My apologies for missing this update! This was an absolutely brilliant chapter; I LOVE the insight that we got into Eden’s life/backstory. I completely resonated with her desire to tell someone about her meeting with Red Hood, and I love the way that you handled her realization that her little anecdotal experience carries a much greater weight than she realized. I just love to see Eden existing in Gotham in general, trying to disappear among the citizenry all the while being confronted with just how deeply engrained the culture of Gotham is into, well, everything and everyone.

    And, of course, the fight! Holy shit. It’s really awesome to see how Eden handles herself. Again, just enough information about her to give us a full understanding of what the stakes are in this situation, while leaving enough mystery to make me want to dig even deeper into Eden’s past. Excellent work once again! I’m going to jump straight into the next chapter 😁

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    1. Jaygrl22 on Chapter 3 Tue 01 Dec 2020 05:36PM UTC

      You commented!! 💕💕 I was hoping you would, Anon! Your feedback makes me so happy. It reminds me someone else out there is enjoying my story and inspires me to keep going 🥰💕
      The detail you put into this comment has me G L O W I N G with happiness. Thank you so, so much for taking the time to tell me your thoughts. I'm so so so SO happy to hear them!!! 💕🥰💕🥰

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