"Knock it off,” Warren pushed Dale away. “I’m not frozen.”
“Oh, well, then I guess you will need that hot chocolate to heat you up,” Lena said. Warren’s eyes widened so much that they looked like they were trying to pop right out of his head.
“No, no, I still need hot chocolate,” Warren insisted. He wrapped his arms around himself and shivered in an overly exaggerated way. “I’m so cold.”
That's so cute I can't 😂😂😂 And I love how Warren wants to be so helpful! He's doing a fantastic job with it, even if he isn't perfect 💕 My sister once set my alarm clock ahead an hour because she figured that if I had extra time to get a bunch of our chores done in the morning that she could sleep in 😂 P.S Sorry I keep bringing up my siblings, but everything in this fic is just making me think of my own little sisters and brothers. It manages to hot everything just right! Slightly off-topic and do not feel obligated to answer this question, although reading this does make me wonder if you happen to have siblings of your own. You write the relationship so perfectly that even if my experiences are different, I can still picture it happening and feel the family essence from it!
I do in fact have siblings, both older and younger. I didn't consciously base Dale and Warren's relationship off of what I have with my siblings, but I'm not surprised that's how it turned out. And thank you so much for your reviews. I'm glad you're enjoying this story.
Ahhh! With how well you have written sibling relationships, I figured you had to have at least one! But even still, you are an amazing, incredible writer!!! I think that every single chapter so far has been my favorite. I always think, "wow, I love this chapter, nothing will top this!" and the BAM next chapter is just as great and fantastic. I love it!! And I love your writing style!!!
And you're welcome!! I've been trying to show a little more love lately and write more comments since comments are always my most favorite-est thing to recieve. That being said, I have to hope that you aren't getting, like, a gazillion email notifications from AO3 be ause of this. I'd hate to flood your inbox, although I hope that recieving compliments make it a little more bearable. I was scrolling through all of this fics comments though on the full work and it was a lot of me 😂 I hope I'm not too repetitive! If I have been I apoligize. Your works are truly fantastic though!! Magnificent!! Incredible!!! And with that being said, I hope you have a fabulous holliday season and a really good 2021. I'll probably forget to write that later so might as well do it now!!!
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