I adore the opening bit about the constellations, first off. <3 Seriously, one of my fav things in fic is when the author includes a passage like that.
I am a BIG FAN of the structure in this story, it felt so natural and even if the story hadn't been good(it was, though, it's glorious) that alone would have kept me reading because it was so well done. Also I love Carver, I mean, all of your characterizations are perf, but I thought I'd mention him in particular because yes.
FINALLY, THAT ENDING HAS BEEN HAUNTING ME ALL DAY. IT IS AMAZING.
Ahhh thank you so much! I am really, really glad the ending worked (I spent a lot of time while writing this going ???? at my own scenes & wondering if they were too unclear), and CARVER. YES. All of the Carver!
Ohhh man I feel you, some scenes you just have to hope for the best. All of these are super clear though!! :> But the ending is probably my favorite. Such a great and terrible mental image, UGHHH
Carver is such a darling little shit, I would give him a noogie if I could ever meet him! But also probably a hug.
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