Oh gosh, this was fabulous, I really enjoyed the touches of Hawke's history and of the way the Dragon Age lore was woven into the rest of the story. I hope by "I'm not quite finished yet" there'll eventually be a happy ending for her, though! Also I don't often enjoy Carver, but I really love your voice for him in this, and the way you wrote the relationship between the siblings.
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