ZombiePigeon (Guest)
on Chapter 5
Sat 09
Jan 202109:09PM UTC
I like the story so far but there are some points for improvement. I feel like you need to space things out more and make it flow more naturally. It's a bit difficult to follow along and if you explained and characterized things better then it would make it easer.
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ZombiePigeon (Guest) on Chapter 5 Sat 09 Jan 2021 09:09PM UTC
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