Gideon absolutely would xD “Can you put Cherry and Vanilla coke in this?”
Yeah I wanted to highlight both and show their povs. But Gideon got the more fun things to do for sure. And Gideon definitely is the character of the two I relate to more so she probably ran away more in this chapter than Harrow did in her own.
Yeah I keep trying to tease their histories but not spell it out just yet, so I like that you’re eyes are already on it 👀
The teens! :D I couldn’t help myself, I love them and want to give them more things to do <3
I felt like Gideon would be good at riddles. it was a weird idea I couldn’t let go of, and once I found the one in my memory banks that fit and did the research on it it was great, and I’m glad you were entertained xD
Harrow can only be in good moods in spurts. it’s just who she is right now. Gideon will help with that :3
The heathers musical is actually a banger. Very entertaining, extreme, music is great. I latched onto this song and found a time to use it haha
Harrows, so Im sorry 😂 I know it is well overplayed, I just loved the visual of Harrow, who wouldn’t know popular music, humming a lizzo song.
Thanks again for diving in my friend, I am excited to do more in this world soon! :D
'Yeah I wanted to highlight both and show their povs. But Gideon got the more fun things to do for sure.' - Ah I didn't mean it like that, my apologies, lemme try and explain better...
The way chapter 1 was written compared to chapter 2 felt just a little bit different for me like Gideon had proper took control of the story and explained everything in her own way more so errrr;
'There's a cup on the table' vs 'Yo there's this dope cup just vibin tho on this table' .... if that makes sense? The writing here felt more comfortably her even when she wasn't talking (of course not as extreme as what I wrote but I hope that got the point across?). So I meant it like it feels in-between chapters you got a better grip of writing her/her universe in her eyes comfortably it felt like idk. I'm bad at explaining things sometimes but I can't just leave it and be like heh you explained something, that'll do, it'd bug me sorry XD~
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