The plot is unique and that's what I loved about the story but when you started writing she/her instead of he/his and then changing it back I didn't feel like completing the chapter and I was going to stop in the middle of the chapter and there are some grammar mistakes but for me it wasn't the problem I'm telling you this because your plot is great but when you started changing the 'he' into 'she' I couldn't concentrate and the fun of the story started going away so please if you can change it it will be better and will be easier to know who is who I don't mean to sound rude I just want to help
Hi! Thank you very much for your comment, I apologize for those grammatical errors, they are mostly because English is not my mother tongue, so I still have to fix it, don't worry I will take care of correcting those errors and replacing the "Ella." for "him. Thanks for your comment and correction, thanks for reading, and don't worry, you didn't sound rude, this helps me improve as a writer:D
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