You know I don’t agree with much Smyer does but naming Rose’s abuser Royce King was really brilliant. It’s such a presumptive and pompous name and it leaves a bitter aftertaste. The strange cultish illusions you make with him only elevate that eerie ness and make you want to take Rose away from him all the faster.
Bella and Rose’s interactions are giving me such a boost of serotonin but ooooffff why do I feel like the next turn is just going to break my heart? They are so sweet in this chapter and I am ready to be hurt again. As always I’m astounded by your odd premises and am excited to see where they lead!
(Sorry if it looked like I deleted a comment, somehow this got posted on ch 1 when I meant to comment on ch2? Blahhhh)
The little intros for most of the chapters are pretty uncomfortable to write, I won't lie. I have to like, put on my evil hat.
Bella and Rose being automatic underground besties is one of like 3 things in my life right now that makes me Feel Anything, so you can be sure we'll get a lot of little moments between them!
I'm happy you're liking this one so far! I've been wanting to write about a moody, isolated island for about a year now and this was the perfect opportunity! Thanks for reading and commenting!!
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