Finally a one of good stories that Include Toji as Main Character. Didn't know, how hard to find a good storyline and characterizations that also revolt around Toji's? Let me tell you it soo hard and sometimes i've feel like wanna give up if i read another TojixReader stories that turn out to be a Smut, every single time.
I don't have problems with Smut stories, but sometimes it soo cringe and ooc for Toji himself. Unless, they make good background stories for Toji to be such an OOC with Reader and don't always jump at Smut itself. I want see someone make Toji as Human, not always as DILF with boner 24hours. (Let me tell you, they don't do that. And if someone give them little bit criticism about it, they gonna say you an hater and then block you)
And the character of Reader.......is perfect. I usually don't always like Reader as character because many of them is literally written too perfect. It's like freaking Mary Sue at all with only different name. He or she, didn't have struggle to maintain a relationship or struggle with anything else beside Boys, i guess?
But, this Reader, she is have many struggle through her life. Her sister dying, her husband cheating, but sometimes i see she been gaslighting and manipulate by her husband at their marriage , so i can tell she also little bit blamed her herself to be such ignorance for her husband fault. And the top at all, she didn't have someone for just talk to about her problems. Kinda trying to keep to herself until she dies.
It's kinda remind me of my old self...... When i was still teenager, i had a couple guys as crushes. But, when i tried to get know them better as person . It's always ended one sided. Sometimes they just wanna jump into your pant, didn't wanna commitment at all. The other that i think at that time be kind to me, turn out to be huge jerk that been tried to used me as connection to get closer at my best friend (She is Hottest girl at our school).
With all those one sides stories. It always make me think, i am pretty? or still it because i am ugly and my awkwardness is seem pretty weird too boys want get close to me?. I live at South Asian and have brown skin. The beauty standard at here is required you have white skin like korean. If you don't, and you are not pretty? And my best friend have a whitest skin at school, so many boys that want her as girlfriend.
When you have brown skin at South Asian, just prepare yourself to get comments by other people about your skin. Sometimes the comments is pretty hurt because one of my crushes and people who close to me also comment about it. It makes me feel awful about my skin. And sometimes i wish that i was born with white skin, not brown skin. But, my best friend slapped me with a fact i am beautiful even with darker skin and it makes me grateful for the that.
So yeah here am, at 20th, still single and never had boyfriend or in serious relationship at all.
Sorry if my comment get bit personal to you, i just wanna say, keep continuing this story until it finished and don't ever delete it, because it too good. Also keep safe from new variations of Covid-19. That all. Thank you.
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SeruAz on Chapter 1 Tue 13 Jul 2021 09:55AM UTC
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