Comment on Cross Ange: The Knight of Hilda

  1. Eric_Michael_Kline on Chapter 1 Sat 07 Aug 2021 03:54AM UTC

    Well the thing is it's not exactly a F/F fic. It's predominantly M/F with some canon yuri couples on the side. It's more like someone awakening to their full sexuality which is what Hilda is going to experience the more time she spends with Rio and the two gradually grow closer. The lack of sympathetic male characters and the absolutist stance it took in regards to the Mana-using humans' persecution of the Norma were what I felt to be the main flaws so this story was an attempt to correct it.

    And I appreciate the encouragement. I told her if she had a problem than she should just write her own story but I guess she couldn't put her money where her mouth was.

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    1. RhaenaTargaryen on Chapter 1 Sat 07 Aug 2021 04:12AM UTC

      I think I'll keep reading your story and see how I feel about it before I give Cross Ange a shot. I don't really care for stories that lack either sympathetic males or females to balance it out so it sounds like your story might be more my cup of tea than the actual real story is.

      Well, the problem with bullies is they like to talk really loud but they tend not to be able to put their money where their mouths are.

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      1. Eric_Michael_Kline on Chapter 1 Sat 07 Aug 2021 01:44PM UTC

        I get that a lot. I was expecting a ton of flak for pairing Hilda with a male OC but a lot of people have actually called my story better than canon.

        Of course feel free to post other comments or whatever questions you have.

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