THE FUCKING THING WITH THE SILVER EGG MADE ME WANT TO SLAP HIM. It was exactly like the "even your farts will smell of roses" thing and I groaned so hard when he kept saying stupid shit like that. The bastard. But it works. That exact sort of appalling blokey humour has always been around and even the historical Ja'far wasn't immune to it. Even if Abu Nuwas was the master of it and even Ja'far found him disgusting. But, yes. Trust Jaffar to crack a joke like that. I am this close to drawing a cartoon of a falcon plopping silver eggs out of its bottom and a cad-moustachioed cat chuckling evilly next to it.
And yes, the bit where Jaffar shows her and us a good closeup of what her arse and bits look like |-q It's a nice porn image and I'd had it in my head forever and it was a relief to finally be able to transfer it into fic. Gaping and striped buttocks and dripping plump pussies and long, elegant Jaffar fingers... *happysigh*
OF COURSE THERE IS RIMMING. And he is a disgusting, filthy pig but we adore him for that, don't we? I can just imagine the huffing and disgusting noises he makes--you *know* those Connie noises--as he slurps and grunts and sucks the spheres out of her hole. But Jaffar would totally do that, the filthy sod.
And awww, so glad you liked the mystical sex! The lanterns come from the mystical writings of the time, but you probably guessed this :3 (And June had flat buttocks! She had really wide hips but I saw some other pictures of her and was surprised at how flat her bum was. So she was all hourglassy at the front but boy-bummed from behind and I'm sure Jaffar loved that combo on ze pwinzezz.)
*gives hankies for you to mop the tears* I really loved mixing the male/female up and everything. And the falcon scene at the end was something that came to me when I was half-asleep in the morning and I typed it down on my phone in a trance, so it was like it came from somewhere else and I was just transcribing. It was one of the most amazing writing experiences I'd ever had, so I'm really glad it moved you. I couldn't proofread it without crying and I still can't look at it without crying, so it means a lot to me. It's definitely one of the best things I've ever written, so it really means a lot to me that the imagery works for someone else as well. *gives you more hankies*
And thanks again for all the wonderful, wonderful comments. This is the sort of feedback us writers live and breathe for. Thank *you*!
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Snowgrouse on Chapter 3 Tue 08 Oct 2013 09:02AM UTC
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