Comment on An Arc of Shining Stars

  1. Tango Mike (Guest) on Chapter 1 Thu 16 Dec 2021 04:14PM UTC

    Ah, what a wonderful way to start us off on book two. The descriptions are vivid and satisfying, and it's cool to see the results of Jaune's actions in the waking world. Amusing too that despite Jaune's circumstances, bureaucracy ends up slowing things down, if only just.

    I look forward to the next chapter.

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