This is a very intriguing perception of Oscar, and the hollowing process as a whole. The way your write him is tantalizing. He is a man composed of anguish and a longing for a more purposeful fate, and you have captured him perfectly. The dread, the hate, the envy, the want to be known. Oh, how very human for a man about to go hollow. Your descriptions of his painful fate, with the want to move and speak, yet being weighed down by his pain and equipment, is devastatingly befitting, and precisely as I would imagine it to be. Waves of agony, claws sinking in, like an angry maw biting into the flesh - your views on hollowing are quite unique. I have not seen it described quite so impactfully. Most focus on just the mind and its withering, but you highlight the pain as well. And you do so very well, I must say! Your writing style is captivating, and I cannot wait to dive further into this story of yours. Thank you so much for sharing it. <3
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spicedreamer on Chapter 1 Wed 23 Mar 2022 03:20PM UTC
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