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  1. eclecticstudent on Chapter 1 Tue 19 Apr 2022 10:09PM UTC

    Thank you for taking one for the team and for writing this absolut piece of debauchery. I loved it!!!! Even more so because you can tell that Marc is just overwhelmed (and I think Steven sees it eventually) and not actually scared. Khonshu is having the time of his long life with his avatar, and now two for one? Yeah, never letting this one/s go, i think.

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    1. dragongummy on Chapter 1 Tue 19 Apr 2022 10:35PM UTC

      EXACTLY. I really wanted it to be clear that yeah, Marc was scared the first time, but only because he didn't know wtf was happening. He still knew Khonshu wasn't going to hurt him, but he wasn't prepared for what happened either. And now my boy gets dicked down every night like he deserves. AAAAAAND now my OTHER boy gets dicked down too.
      Kim Kardashian voice:
      It's what she deserves :)

      Thank you for reading, darling!!

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