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  1. ok finishedd the first five chapters ansd i look foward to reading the next ones, good job mate!

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    1. Hey, thank you kindly man!

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      1. your welcome, while its not as well written as others i can see the effort you put in so i felt an angolagement was in order

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        1. That is to be expected, I am still very new to writing in general. I'll get better with time though

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          1. from the way your going i would say you are on the right track, keep it up!

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