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  1. HopeOfQueens on Chapter 3 Sat 14 May 2022 12:30PM UTC

    Hey Dani,

    Glad to hear you’re enjoying this story so far! Thanks for commenting.

    Biggs/ Luke forever ♥️. They definitely do deserve each other. I imagine at the end of this series (when*spoilers* they do get together) the whole galaxy will go crazy over the two heroes being together 😊

    So - Vader interactions will be coming, but this particular book is more centered around Padmé’s decision to become a Jedi. The sequel, ‘Heirs,’ narrated from Luke’s POV again (I think) will then have much more Vader interactions.

    Yeah... Padmé doesn’t take the revelation too well. That’s all I’ll say for now...

    By the way- I wanted your opinion: I was thinking and wanted to know if you would rather this book, which, like I said, centers around her choice to become a Jedi, was shorter so we could move onto the next one or would like for it to take more time to develop what the Imperial court is like and the royal side of rebellion spying. Let me know.

    Warm wishes,
    Hope

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    1. daniraevys on Chapter 3 Sat 14 May 2022 01:01PM UTC

      Hello Hope,

      Biggs/Luke forever indeed❤

      Ooh Padme's journey to become a jedi! I wonder how she'll react when she meets force ghosts. And I'm sure Han & Leia will have opinions on her decision(Though Padme sure won't care about it that much).

      Excitedly waiting for future Vader-Luke-Padme interactions.

      Now, coming to your question. In my personal opinion, I'd prefer it if this book was shorter. Yes, I love your character of Padme Solo and would love to see her developed, but I'm more attached to Luke. Still though, I'm interested in seeing Padme interact with imperials(Tarkin and others) now that her Empire worship has died down.

      Wishing you a happy writing,
      Dani

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      1. HopeOfQueens on Chapter 3 Sat 14 May 2022 01:28PM UTC

        Hey,

        Thanks for your thoughts. I agree with you, and am planning to make this one more of a novella. But I wanted to get inside her mind in order to explain in-depth her decision to be a Jedi. Then, we can get to - among other things - Luke training her, which should be fun from his POV lol 😂

        Have a great rest of your day,
        Hope

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