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  1. BFG_blueapple303 Tue 21 Jun 2022 08:32PM UTC

    Oooih i lije this. Lois us usyally good at keeping abakancw abd they did start iff as strangers wuth ckear boundaries...especially after the knock out when he thought she did like him for a second.

    I like the feelings creeping up on him until they sttiked at his heart when ge keast exlected duribg a nice calm homey moment.

    I like loid at first confused but figured it out quickly..i wonder if he wasntask determede to deny his own feelings or acting on it he wouldnt have broken his own heart enough to get the disease...it felt like he was affected by the idea after he doub knk ed dow mb b he'd have to keave them one day.

    I likethe shock of coughing it off..him being unsettked by it but covering it up.

    I really like his newness to the feelling. His pride in his usyal professionalsajim still going to work distracted...im surorused we dudnt see him talk to frankie at all.

    I li kne the posituves abd negatives fkr the surgery. Part ou f hom nkt wanting to go throigh it but also hhs surtity it woukd bother yuriso he ttued to jeep ut from her...i liij e hom bribging rry oses both to cheer her up and CV over fir as ny flowers he .ight miss.

    I like hkow its phyolicical...if 6ou think its requited even if its not youll be cured...sa mb e if you think its unrequited even if it is.

    I love anya sd sing something was wrongm..her trying to out yors feeling but it nott having as much of a impact because he js sure it woukd bith yir ir put pressure on her.

     

    I like anya scared loid woukd diebut ajso tryibg to skend as much tinevwith him as possivje. I pike him thinking of qgat he might forget ir might not care about. Loid has a very caring heart so ot woukd definitly affect...
    In surprised nightfall didnt got involved.

    I lije him being told to tell yor but he doesnt...him hiding the calks and actinglike things are find.

    I like loid fonding a way to admit the cough and we get why hed hide it...i lir the reminde shrgury is hard refardless. I likehuw the sss getting the doctor put a sense of dread if twiligt might die.

    I like it get ij ng vad to the point he couldnt hide the cough abd yor found out about it.

    Loid getong a bit sloppy civering ut up.

    I love hiw genuinely witrued yor was and hiw started and janiced loid was getting caught.

    Interesting to see yor assume he has a unrequited feelings for someone else.

    I do kind of wish loid pointed out that the dusease cant actually sense if the feelings are ubrwquired..surprised he didnt gave a bigger bliw to his ego ir have denial....after all he us suppoused to be goid at readibg emotions tet yor gas liced him fkr a while snd he never noticed?!

    Though if yor was tricking him to fix him it certainky worked XD

    Considering loud cobsidered it a optiob earlie surprised that didnt pop up.

    Kibdif wish qe saw more duscussion about hiq he his ir and thought gw was dying for a while.

    I lijw him getting a check up.

    Probably usnt healthy to have p loants gr ij wing in you even temorarily.

    I love the giddy feeling of hope ahen yor said it wouldnt b.c. e unrequited and ge clarifued it was her.

    I 2lwonder qhat woukd have happened if yor wasnt in live with him yet. Adter all y oj r gas less experience. And as a assasin... she might think igt woukdnt ge dajr to ex onect qgen zhe hff adnt b.c.een honest.

    I love tg he l ok ve confessiobs but with bkth hiding big secedrts hij w can they trust tge ot hff ers feelings entirely wou knkdnt change if the other knew? Though jf yor wasnt in l oj ve i cou knjd definitky see yor teing him that she will choose to try.

    That.jst gave beensorelieving fir gandler sbd everyone.

    I love them here...you showcase alot if go oj d gompkex emotions aboit potentjally dying in r tiskibg yor feelibfs ir mb emotions that make up a good part of yourself. I like tge gandker telling him to stay uone from work.

    Thoigh isnt there the oppotion to make someone fall out of love with you?

    I 2onder if to save loid yor might think if she told him she was a assasin he woukdnt love her anymore.

    I wonder if a ya gad any ralks ro research with becky.

    Since if appears in dramas.

    I like loid spoiling them to his hearts content.

    I dont kn ok w yor.....lo uh d stil seens li retty fond of roses XD

    Cute to see them laugh.

    I like hiw youbwrite huh is relief getting him weak Legted and teary eyed. Reminds me of anya

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    1. deonideatta Tue 21 Jun 2022 09:10PM UTC

      Wow this is probably the longest comment I've received on a fic haha, thanks for reading!! I'm glad you liked it enough to dig into the particulars of it :)

      To answer some of your questions, nightfall and franky don't appear bc I haven't reached the part of the manga where nightfall debuts, and I quite simply forgot about franky skdjs my bad :')) I think he'd have probably told twilight to get his act together tho lol

      I feel like the psychological aspect of hanahaki is more interesting than it being purely magical tbh (though ig there's always gonna be smth magic based about flowers randomly growing and disappearing from people's lungs lol), and it's fitting considering loid's job as a psychologist and Twilight's analytical approach to stuff

      I kinda benched anya for this one lol, but I love the idea of her asking becky for advice based on her soaps lol, if this wasn't for twiyor week I'd have liked to go more into her view on the whole situation.

      As for the option of twilight trying to make himself fall out of love with yor, I left it out bc I like to think he was so far gone it didn't ever occur to him lol

      But yea, thank you so much for reading, and thank you for taking the time to write out everything you enjoyed about the fic :D

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