With the privilege of having looked at this all before, I can say that this is one of my very favorite sections--the way you capture her mannerisms and inner monologue is just delightful. Her nervousness giving way to conviction is palpable and just so, so, so true to her as a character and I love the way you've presented it. GREAT work.
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foibles_fables on Chapter 2 Wed 31 Aug 2022 05:47PM UTC
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