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  1. ThePolarTorch on Chapter 2 Mon 05 Sep 2022 09:50PM UTC

    What about Mirable? Is she good?

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    1. ThePolarTorch on Chapter 2 Mon 05 Sep 2022 09:50PM UTC

      I am already too invested in this story

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      1. Cutepuppy23 on Chapter 2 Mon 05 Sep 2022 11:15PM UTC

        Yeah Mirable will be good. It’s just I noticed that there weren’t good descriptions of characters, or certain things didn’t make sense, like how the camp was set up. So I’m just changing certain things, like how the camp is set up and putting more descriptions in. Mirable will be fine and she will show back up repeatedly during the story.

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        1. ThePolarTorch on Chapter 2 Tue 06 Sep 2022 12:25AM UTC

          Good good I’m glad

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    3. Cutepuppy23 on Chapter 2 Wed 12 Oct 2022 10:16PM UTC

      Do you think I should make Mirable a black?

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      1. ThePolarTorch on Chapter 2 Thu 13 Oct 2022 12:39PM UTC

        The depends on wether you want her to take a more general Leadership role or do covering specific. If it’s something specific then maybe go with what’s best for that or say she’s a black that prefers using something specific. If not then you could say she’sa black and have her and MC both take general leadership positions

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        1. Cutepuppy23 on Chapter 2 Thu 13 Oct 2022 03:02PM UTC

          Well I was thinking that it would be idiotic for them to not spread out to help others, so Mirable and several others would go to another camp, take it over, and they make it like Tundra. Where they can live free but stay in the same spot.

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          1. ThePolarTorch on Chapter 2 Fri 14 Oct 2022 01:04PM UTC

            Well if that’s the case, then yeah I’d make her a black

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