I somehow got yet another juicy long reply with even more analysing details! Am I loosing my damn mind? Um. YES!! WITH JOY!!!!!
Even if you're the only one who reads this I will continue it just for you. 😭 You give me motivation like nothing else. 😌🔥 I'm glad you're getting as invested in the Calamities as I am. Yes indeed, Qi Rong needs kisses (If only he didn't try to bite everyone who tried).
He Xuan is a baby calamity, which is hilarious cause he's leader of the book right now. He knows next to nothing about the other calamities so he's still trying to feel them out. Even Hua Cheng who he's closest to has skeletons in the closet.
Fortunately, Qi Rong is an open book.
They didn't think the whole orgy idea through but are too proud to back out. Once again thanks so much for the everlasting long comment I love you so much!!! 🥺 You saying you're in love with my work. My heart 😭❤️ Thank you. I- Thank you. (｡♡‿♡｡)
Also, don't apologize for your brain rot. I love it.
Always sort of imagined Bai Wuxiang as a kind of big man. I don't know. He's tall and exudes an aura of respect and fear. I know he significantly dwarfs Xie Lian. The only one nearly as tall as he is is Hua Cheng (great genes for a dead guy). Bai Wuxiang is indeed horrified by how forward everyone else is. XD He's 2000 years old. Conservative was a way of life.
You getting soft for BWX is making me get really soft for BWX 🥺.
Call me? Um. Ah well. Author is fine for now I guess. Can I call you Faby?
HI AGAIN THIS REPLY WAS FAST BUT ALSO LONG AND DETAILED I’M REALLY LOSING IT RIGHT NOW?!? I love you 😭😭😭😭❤️.
Before I forget
Answer to the last question, yes you may because I like when people call me Faby (I seem to have forgotten that my name is not that but this is only the shorter nickname that I’ve grown to love so much lmao)
OMG YOU CAN’T JUST SAY THAT TO A POOR GIRL WITH A BRAINROT AUTHOR!! I MIGHT FALL IN LOVE EVEN HARDER!?!?!
EVEN IF I WAS THE ONLY READER I WOULD STILL SHOWER YOU WITH BOTH MY BRAINROT (long detailed juicy comments and praise in the end of the comment because it’s now a rite for me because I love you author🤟)
I’m still gonna give you detailed comments because everytime I reread I find something I didn’t notice lmao.
Qi Rong here is just like a friend of mine, SHE BITES TO GIVE AFFECTION IT HURTS.
I CRIED NOT THE CONSERVATIVE BWX, after this I have to add that covering even a fake face with the mask is kinda like Victorian maidens and their juicy ankles (can we see Bwx’s ankles or he gets shy again?!?)
This is not a surprise for anyone but I still got a soft spot especially for him even in the novel?! I think I fell too deep I can’t get back to when I was normal (I wasn’t normal)
I THINK IT’S FUNNY THAT HE XUAN HAS ONLY THIS AREA AS ONE OF EXPERTISE
Like, the other calamities can tell you how to hide a body in a trashbin without blinking and they are on their knees to get some smooches!?! I really like how they become when He Xuan praises them, LIKE YOU GOT THE OLDER CALAMITY PURRING BECAUSE YOU PRAISED HIM?!?! That’s a thing that should go in his curriculum it’s not easy to not be beheaded if you do this without warning.
Everyone here got a praise kink (it’s a bonus with the trust issues).
ALSO I have to tell the paragraph again because otherwise I get lost and ramble about other things without an order (it’s the neurodivergence); it’s two specifically points this time that I point(heard the pun?)
1.
//They pulled apart, breathing harshly while the others watched them in fascination, Bai Wuxiang cocking his head in interest.//
FOR THIS I have something to say, I got butterflies in various points (again with points I’m so funny. I’m not I’m sorry), FIRST everyone here got hard just from watching them kiss (don’t let me start on the touch-starve everyone has or I will finish the characters for this comment) FIRST Bwx getting fascinated while he watches with Qi Rong!!!! I picture them red faced and panting because they find it attractive and hot (it is)
SECOND OF ALL is that I noticed again how they not only get excited physically (I know their pp is hard I KNOW) but this being disheveled from arousal still doesn’t erase the fact that they genuinely want to learn, by cocking their head in interest like they were listening to a very difficult lecture (different context but I feel the example is fitting to this).
Btw I think Bai Wuxiang should get more dick because of that line in the first chapter, BECAUSE after Hua Cheng put a prohibition on gang bang he watches in a suspicious way Bwx, like he “regrets” putting a ban before having got you know, to gang up on him (I think he would really die knowing how he’s being).
This is indulging on my need to see Bwx get wrecked because it would be delicious, I also think how you think about him, when it’s about him I don’t focus on the various atrocities lmao, I just feel that not caring or putting them in the equation he is soft strong big man, even if his form when he’s Bwx is lankier and not full of muscles like when he fakes, more like how he appeared when he was the crown Prince of Wuyong), (a twink), I also still don’t sleep because of that concept of him for the manhua, BLACK LIPSTICK AND A FAIR FACE, maybe it’s the skin he’s using right now.
Also talking about skins I didn’t connect the dots on Hua Cheng, did he give himself both eyes since he changed skin because he didn’t want to fuck with the other calamities in his true form for Xie Lian?
Ok ending the questions I have to say that if Bwx loses a bit of control and lets the mask slip I think they would still say the skin that’s still him is pretty, EVERYONE IS PRETTY HERE, black lipstick stains everywhere he kisses!!? His lips red(tinted with black stains because he got kissed hard) and swollen?!?! It’s hot.(please don’t shame me ;-;).
HE EXUDES RESPECT AND FEAR TO SEE HIM LOSE IT ONLY THINKING ABOUT IT GIVES BUTTERFLIES?!!?(Hua Cheng stop it)
2.
//Hua Cheng once again attached their lips together, drawing a gasp from Qi Rong and Bai Wuxiang as they kissed against, and damn was it sexy.
Their arms wound around each other and Hua Cheng gently tilted He Xuan's chin up with his hand before they once again drew apart, eyes locked for a moment of silence before they pulled away from each other.
Hua Cheng had a small mystified expression on his face, his hand over his mouth as he slowly took in what had just happened. He turned to He Xuan who looked him dead in the eyes as he slowly ran his tongue over his lips.
Everyone stared at He Xuan in shock.
Now they couldn't figure out if he'd liked kissing Hua Cheng or he'd just decided he wouldn't mind eating him.
"Okay, Bai Wuxiang, you're next," //
I have the physical need to talk to you about this right now.
As I said before it’s right everyone gets aroused by this, BUT HOW YOU DESCRIBE IT IS PERFECT, Bwx and Qr actually make little sounds of surprise that could be also moans or both because pp hard you know (also without putting hands over their mouth)
Hua Cheng is the most cooperative and the one with the most drive to learn and also PLEASE the others because he is learning not only for Dianxia but also by bodily contact with the calamities (mostly He Xuan but he also learns from the MOST difficult one, in this case Bwx, and not Qr because poor baby hasn’t been getting anything, EVEN RIPPED HX CLOTHES, proudly substituted by Bwx, I see he’s also getting a bit possessive by giving him his coat, not to actually display possession, but because he wanted to, and it was so cute of him, like covering you lover with your jacket, this has the same vibes to me).
HE XUAN IS ACTUALLY ACTING REAL SENSUAL AND SEDUCTIVE IN THE END, LICKING HIS LIPS!?! THE OTHERS THINK HE WANTS TO D E V O U R, (wait till he gets to you both after finishing a bit with him).
The shock Qr and Bwx got!!??!(Qr you’re the cannibal this should be normalcy to you but you’re not normally fucking with the calamities so I believe you’re excused because you’re embarrassed and a virgin we know).
THEY GO TO THINK THAT HX WOULD E A T HC IT’S SO FUNNY IN BOTH WAYS YOU CAN READ IT?!?
Bwx is indeed horrified, SHY, it’s like an oxymoron for someone like Bwx to be horrified by SEXUAL BEHAVIOUR (towards him and other in the room but mostly it’s about himself) that should be pleasure in its most pure form.
I think I’m really down bad for his behaviour please give me more <33
(He’s literally the same age as Jesus it makes sense)
I think everyone should get bolder to him in particular because his reactions are gold
You can get red blush that also reaches the mask by how powerful it is or tiny shivers or get looked at by a shy maiden-like gaze (that’s also disapproving but he’s lying he likes being given attention by how he reacts but he’s shy).
I REALLY GET SOFT FOR HIM YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT HE DOES TO ME WHEN WRITTEN LIKE THIS AND MOST IMPORTANTLY BY YOU
I GOT THE POWER THROUGH THE UNLEASHING OF MY SOFT SPOT TO PASS IT TO YOU TOO?!?! I’m so happy this made my day, I really like when you answer to what I write it makes my day everytime.
I ALSO HAVE TO POINT OUT THAT THE PART IN THE FIRST CHAPTER WHERE QR GETS DARED TO SUCK EVERYONE OFF AND THERE WERE TWO DIFFERENT REACTIONS ENDED ME LIKE, BWX MUMBLING THAT THEY WASH THEIR DICK IS CUTE BUT ALSO FUNNY, THAT BIG MAN MUMBLING WITH A TINY VOICE DOES THINGS TO ME, then there were the other (furious).To end this very UNdetailed comment because I’m almost finishing the characters by how little I write I have to give my usual reminders to you Author!!!
I can’t say this more often than I am doing but I still like to reiterate because you deserve it 🥺🫶🏻
I feel like you’ve really portrayed everyone in a unique way, despite the lack of interactions we have you made it feel like it was near canon, I really really really like how you write, the style, the rhythm and how you explain and tell, the choice of words too!! It feels perfect to read to me.
I’m glad that you don’t find a nuisance me brainrotting 😭😭😭😭😭❤️
I’M AS ALWAYS WAITING FOR AN ANSWER FROM YOU, AS ALWAYS AND IF YOU’D LIKE 🥰
This is so masterfully long and I enjoyed reading every last word!
Woah. Where do I even start? Then I shall call you Faby. 😌❤️ Gonna be honest, I love you too 🥺❤️ and your long detailed replies.
//(I wasn't normal)// 😂😂😂 I don't think I've ever been normal about Bai Wuxiang either. Something about his character intrigues me. I kind of relate to it a lot and I understand why he took certain decisions, even if he went overboard with a lot of them. When it comes to his relationship with sex I headcanon him AroAce because he doesn't even seem to have any solid history with love, so of course he misinterprets everything quite quickly and takes gentleness for a challenge.
Aw come on He Xuan is good at other stuff too. Like....being emo and well, he's canonly very smart and good at disguise.
Yes, everyone's kinda got a praise kink. Qi Rong likes being praised cause very few people praised him in his entire life. It was always getting scolded or beaten or ignored. Hua Cheng has a praise kink but he loves getting praised by Xie Alone and Xie Lian's praise makes him so darn soft. It's adorable. He Xuan has a praise kink. It's not as loud as everyone else's but he's been through a lot and probably appreciates words of endearment from time to time. Definitely better than curses or words from his terrified victims. He misses being loved. Let He Xuan be loved. Bai Wuxiang has a praise kink, I think it's the saddest version of a praise kink, because he needs the praise to live. He figured if he's getting praised then no one hates him, which means no one is going to hurt him like they did before in Wuyong, when everyone he loved abandoned him. Praise = Doing great. Unstoppable. No torture. Praise is excellent in Bai Wuxiang's books.
I also look forward to fics where Bai Wuxiang gets wrecked (sexually). It's a shame that there's pretty much zero of those, or could count the ones available on one hand.
Ah yeah, sorry for not specifying, Hua Cheng's fake body looks exactly like his ghost king form with the one eye. It is just a fake body.
//HE XUAN IS ACTUALLY ACTING REAL SENSUAL AND SEDUCTIVE IN THE END, LICKING HIS LIPS!?! THE OTHERS THINK HE WANTS TO D E V O U R, (wait till he gets to you both after finishing a bit with him).//
He Xuan likes what he likes 😌
Not Bai Wuxiang being the same age as Jesus 😂
You going feral over Bai Wuxiang is making me feral over Bai Wuxiang!!!
I'm glad you love it. When I write I try my best to make sure they are as canon as possible. Then again it's mostly up to my interpretation and some people might see it different but damn you spoil me with these Uber long comments. I love you. Thank you. ❤️❤️
OMG TODAY I HOPE I DON’T GET AN INDIGESTION FROM GETTING FED TOO MUCH FROM YOU😳😳😳💕💕 FIRST A VERY JUICY UPDATE THAT I’M ALREADY WRITING A LONG COMMENT ™️ FOR BECAUSE OH MY GOD WHAT WAS THAT DELICIOUS I WANT MORE😳😳😳 THEN I ALSO GET A REPLY FOR MY PREVIOUS REPLY?!?! I love you so much I can never specify it to much 😭😭😭 When I read the // he went a bit overboard// this is how I feel most of the time Relatable I THINK THAT THE HEADCANON FITS Don’t know if he could develop more libido with this experience but if he does oh god it could get even juicier I feel like the little gestures make his heart faster and his cheeks red, HE’S NOT USED TO IT and that’s even more amusing to see, usually stoic character that melts at the smallest bit of attention and love that’s shown to him?!?! As always count me in. I LOVE HOW HE’S PORTRAYED DIFFERENTLY BY YOU IN EVERY FIC, yesterday night I devoured the chapters of your dark Xie Lian fic and amusing is the only word I have to describe how he was portrayed😤 it was (again) delicious😳😳 I think how you portray a different facade in every fic when he’s there it’s the most delicious view of the facades (masks, understood? Because he wears a literal mask? I’ll stop it with the puns I’m sorry but today is not the day) he dons. This facade he has here is indeed a facade I want to put in my mouth and eat. I’m projecting my need to see him utterly wrecked by all the other calamities because he needs it and I think you feel that need too join the dark side. IT’S SO DELUSIONAL THAT THERE ARE TOO LITTLE FICS ABOUT HIM WRECKED (sexually because he’s already wrecked in every aspect).
Andddd rip Hx I guess. Boys got some juicy specialisations too, still can’t beat Bwx’s arson I’m sorry(lmao)
Still wanna see him wreck everyone because he deserves it. I think he especially wants to top them all with how they’re being, or just shut them up and make them work for the praise.
ABOUT THE PRAISE *insert Lenny face* THE PARAGRAPH YOU WROTE I LOVE YOU SO MUCH 😭😭
I THINK THAT IT’S A VERY DETAILED THING TO TALK ABOUT, THE VIEW EVERYONE HAS ON GETTING PRAISED, still not sexually I think the view will change if they experience an inherently sexual praise, THE GENERAL VIEW EVERYONE HAS ON PRAISE IS SO DIFFERENT AND FITTING LIKE A TAILOR MADE SUIT ON THEM. I especially felt sad for Bwx and Qr because they were the one conditioned by the violence they received, but for everyone except that thirsty little Hc because he just goes “I want gege’s praise” (when we know that praise is a thing that he sometimes struggles to accept because like Qr and Bwx got violence when he was young), but then he melts under the other even if he bickers with them to not make it obvious. It would be especially funny if under everyone initiative and not a command they shapeshift to Xie Lian’s form and get hit for that, they’re just pure comedy. Bwx made me cry again, my boy should get the more praise out of everyone and being cleared from the phrase “praise is when you don’t it me” instead it should go from “they praise me because they want to praise me, I was good” but it is a bit of work, LET HIM GET THERAPY THROUGH GETTING WRECKED.
I think I’m a bit biased I love all the calamities equally but Bwx has some privileges!
Thank you so much for clearing that little doubt I had about Hc’s skin, I got stuck on it and couldn’t imagine the scenario without erasing his face in my head.
Every single one of them should get praised and moan because of it methinks
He Xuan likes to wreck fellow calamities how scandalous!!! (continue please)
I think that we have this recurrent phrase in every comment based on how I picture Bwx in the specifically comment because I always get “You going *emotion I conveyed* for Bwx is making me *emotion* for Bwx” I hope when they start hitting him I will make you feral in a horny way You will always be famous and this will probably be our wedding vows
HE TECHNICALLY IS THE SAME AGE AS JESUS IT’S A FACT
I PROBABLY WILL GIVE YOU ANOTHER COMMENT IN NOT MORE THAN THIS EVENING, JUST GIVE ME SOME TIME 🕰️
Daily reminder Remember to make your Bai Wuxiang’s subs that want praise and get off on it kids
I THINK HE ALSO NEVER TOUCHED HIMSELF WITH ALL HE WENT THROUGH HE DIDN’T HAVE NOR THE TIME NOR THE LESSONS WITH THE BIRDS AND BEES I hope he comes in big loads because of the abstinence
Juicy
I probably should come to the conclusion that Qr Hc and Bwx have never touched themselves It will be a fun ride (literally)
Hx has to give them sex ed on everything and they would listen paying attention on everything like cute students (which they are, they are so cute to me I’m so invested) Hands on sex ed for all the inexperienced calamities
Regardless from the jokes I want to say thank you really much because as always I’m going to praise you🫵🏻 because I like this fic so much
I also want to say that YOU are the one who’s spoiling me I’m just a girl with brainrot who comments daily on your fic and waits for a reply from you diligently because you make my day everytime you update or reply to me🥹
Thank you for writing this (spam of emojis time)🙏🙏🙏🙏🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🤲🛐🛐🛐🛐🛐🛐🛐🛐🛐🛐🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️🧎🏻♀️(on my knees)
My reply is sinfully late, I am so sorry and plead forgiveness.
It is indeed just a little awkward writing an asexual orgy experience but I think it would be a fun challenge. Though this should note this doesn't cover all asexual experiences as some are repulsed by sex and Bai Wuxiang is considerably mentally unstable so.... Moving on.
YOU READ THAT!! (Flushes in embarrassment.) Yeah...that fic....is not going to be cute I can tell you that. 💀 (I mean I do like cute moments. Might accidentally add cute moments.), but it will be rough. Still you read it. 🥺 And liked it. ❤️ Yay.
But yeah, he's embodying all of his rotten behaviour in that fic.
Don't stop with the mask puns because it is so symbolic!!! 😆 His armour and mask breaking at the end with Xie Lian finally able to see him for who he was and he was just a really tired old immortal. 🥺 Wearing mask upon mask for 2000 years. Exhausting. He wasn't even particularly evil. He was just in so much pain that he wanted to share it around. 💀
//IT’S SO DELUSIONAL THAT THERE ARE TOO LITTLE FICS ABOUT HIM WRECKED (sexually because he’s already wrecked in every aspect).// Definitely already wrecked in every aspect 😂😭
Thanks for loving the praise thing 😊 Yes to Hua Cheng loving Xie Lian's praise but not knowing how to accept it. 🥺 Sweet baby.
OH MY GOD I DIDN’T GET THE NOTIFICATION OF THIS REPLY I’M SO SORRY 🥹🥹🥹pleading for forgiveness right now.
It would be awkward in every way in my opzionino, we’re still talking about those four, I think it’s very representative of facades of asexuality, and not stereotypical of it because it’s a spectrum there are many ways to experience it, I like that to them it’s mostly about the act in the emotional way, not like in a sex repulsion way. I find it very in character as always(I love you so much did I say it?) With the knowledge from chapter 4 the deduction that I made was actually near what you wrote the only ones who touched themselves are Hc and Hx, I was near, when writing I forgot that Hc had his awakening.
Talking about your other fic, I’m usually too busy on internalising all the events that happen so you don’t see comments by me right now because I’m like “wait I don’t know what and where to start” I’ll probably redeem myself later. Of course I’m not expecting anything near cute for now, I like that it’s only pure agony in every way there. I like it as you are writing it I felt invested. My heart is happy that this one is my current fixation I’m literally fallen head over heels for a fic that was supposed to be crack😀🫶🏻. I love it so much 🥰
I can’t stop with the mask puns physically believe me I will put one every chance I get I’m sorry my humour is broken 😞
I’m irl a sucker for praise too i felt that in a way that shouldn’t be felt
This is what I get for being a kid that was happy if she got good grades and based the early years of it since no friends and bullied lmao.
I’m sorry for the Fab lore really but it was like that. Ignore it.
As I said I like to see him generally wrecked (emotionally and physically not in a sexual way in your other fic, so much potential methinks) (Sexually, I always wait like a hawk on its prey for this fic I have developed an unhealthy fixation and I’m here to feed it but also because I love you💕)
Everyone’s view and taking of praise is so interesting to see in a argumentative point of view.
Also I pictured Bwx on his knees for praise because I’m beyond salvation
He could also be on his knees for other things if you know what I mean
THANKS TO YOU FOR WRITING THE FIC AND ALWAYS RESPONDING TO ME 🥹🥹🥹🥹 I love you 😡💕💕💕
Everyone gets notifications late. Thanks for replying anyway 😊 Though this reply thread is getting rather long. 😂
Gonna start with an early I love you too.
Yes the other fic is rather dark. It's curious, it gets a lot of attention but little to no words. I'm not sure why but imma leave it for now and see what happens while I tie up loose ends.
The mask puns are important, don't apologise for those. 😌
A sucker for praise? Faby is awesome and amazing and an awesome writer! First language or not. Such a considerate deep reader who understands the most complex of characters and doesn't hate characters for just being a villain. Faby is awesome. I am not only super glad that Faby exists but am also glad Faby found my fic and commented so I was able to meet Faby. Love Faby. 😊❤️
Faby lore is awesome too. Faby lore makes Faby Faby. 🤩
Speaking of Bai Wuxiang getting wrecked..... (I do enjoy a good fic where he gets wrecked.)
//Also I pictured Bwx on his knees for praise because I’m beyond salvation He could also be on his knees for other things if you know what I mean// I'd like to pretend like I think it's just funny, but you have no idea how badly I want it too. 🙂 The grains amount of Bai Wuxiang fans on any app gives me a headache.
THANKS FOR ALWAYS RESPONDING! LOVE YOU!! ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
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