Comment on The Road To Yu Dao

  1. eleonorastay on Chapter 3 Sat 22 Oct 2022 09:34PM UTC

    I love how you write Toph’s way of doing things! Like these parts: “If she’d been with anyone else, she would have followed them in and learned the house’s layout bit by bit. Since she had to earthbend Teo up the stairs, though, she started by taking some stone from the porch and spreading it through the house until she found the stairs, then tracing over them step by step until she found the upstairs hallway. She pulled the stone back down to the porch. Then she encased Teo’s wheels and seat in stone and lifted him up the stairs. She climbed up herself and released Teo’s wheels.”

    She followed the sound of him rolling over the wooden floor. […] They were-- not surprisingly-- not in a big echoey room like the Earth King’s throne room, and Toph tried to use the volume of Teo’s voice to judge how far they were from the veteran they were there to see.”

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