I am very ok with a love scene written out, as long as its not crude. I have read many stories where the author took a first time between two characters and wrote it so beautifully that no descriptive detail (blow by blow) had to be given. At the same time I have also read and enjoyed stories with more graphic detail. Unfortunately, some authors don't take their time, rush to get a scene out there because they are not comfortable writing it, and we end up with a mish mash of too much graphic detail and not enough of the emotional connection between the two characters.
If your going to write it, take your time with it, be sure it comes from a place that YOU the author are comfortable with, and don't get too wrapped up describing every touch or detail. If this is your first foray into love scenes, use it as a building tool.
Your writing is wonderful, and your crafting a really nice story here!! I look forward to reading what you come up with!!
Thank you for leaving me such a wonderful review. I will be taking my time and pulling from real life to make this as good as possible. I wont be churning this one out. That's for sure.
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Chaseherchiss on Chapter 4 Fri 06 May 2016 01:20AM UTC
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