Good story so far but a bit confused they are 3 weeks old but able to move around a baby can’t even hold there own head up till 4 months or craw till around 9. Being reborn wouldn’t change what a baby develops at especially since it’s so with muscles forming and things like that. I understand it’s fanfic it just doesn’t make any sense. Nothing against the story it’s been a good read so far.
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Happy283 on Chapter 5 Fri 13 Jan 2023 03:52AM UTC
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