Well, I waited and you delivered. Ik you said yiu don't like dialogue heavy scenes (me neither) but I think you did great. Makoto and Sousuke's relationship is so genuine and I love it. I love Haru feeling guilt and jealousy muahaha! Sometimes I'm Sousuke tbh. When I watch Free :p whoops. I do like Haru, juat not as much as my boys.
Oh my lord I am living for your comments 🥹 they make me so happy! Sousuke and Makoto are so important to this story so I’m glad you think it’s so genuine. And yesss I love Haru but my boys hold my heart and even though he was confused what he did to mako was wrong so I think he deserves a lil guilt 😉
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