Comment on Va'Pak; Uzhau

  1. syllabic_acronyms on Chapter 1 Wed 06 Sep 2023 04:03AM UTC

    I love hyper-competant Jim! This is looking good. (And I need something Trek to read while I wait for the Cavit Ro Voyager AU to come out of between-season hiatus.)

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    1. SofiaDragon on Chapter 1 Thu 14 Sep 2023 01:07AM UTC

      AOS gave me whiplash with how Kirk is this terrible screw-up starting bar fights by being jumped that is the best and most intuitive person after a 3 year time skip. I agree with the fannon that intense trauma and extremely good masks are the only explanation, and seek to use my worldbuilding skills to pave over every plot hole, smooth out the bumps caused by scenes cut for time, adjust the systemic misogyny of fridging a female character to further motivate a male lead who was already greatly motivated, and make pretty sandcastles in my sandbox.

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