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  1. Eternally_passing_through Thu 07 Sep 2023 06:01AM UTC

    Omg, this is so soft and cuuuute! They're so mushy for eachother! ❤️❤️❤️❤️

    I love all of Noah's anticipating Mirage's thoughts and Mirage being like "???? Are you a fucking telepath???"

    Mirage being able to feel Noah while he's the suit is also fantastic and all the little details that come with that. The "you're too fucking soft", the "I can recognize this heartbeat", the sense of intimacy, just- *chief's kiss*

    I also really love that "you're built backwards" bit it's fucking fantastic and now I can't stop thinking of cybertronians as a giant bugs (because that's the first thing I think of when I hear hard outside soft inside) XD

    I also really love that "spark chamber bones" bit. It's 1) hilarious and 2) such a great display of the internal comparisons and investigation Mirage is doing. Usually when I see cybertronians referring to human parts it's either by the full name or they're just referred to as their cybertronian equivalent. I don't think I've ever seen a blend of the two coming from a cybertronian.

    Imfhdgbdy I love the puzzle description for falling in love. It feels so realistic and it's so emotional

    Omfmghref there's so much trust in this, it's so soft!

    Aaah! There's too many bits I like, just-
    “It’s called a pulse. It’s how they check if unconscious people are still alive.” and the Noah just melting into his leg bits and just- *screaming*

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    On another note, *in despair* Aaaaaaah! I've been inspired! But I don't have enough time to do anything until fridaaaaay orz 😭

    I just recently wrote something with a TF oc realizing they actually do care about their human friend directly before finding them hurt and something like this would be such a perfect follow up, especially with their personalities bc they're both crazy dumbasses, so the human would 100% go "Oh, you're afraid you'll hurt me?" *confidently spreads their arms and plants their feet in preperation to recieve a large amount of force* "Punch me!" And because they share one brain cell, the cybertronian would follow through, which would prompt an anatomy lesson XD

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